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    You got me wrong. What I wanted to say is that...

    You got me wrong. What I wanted to say is that the story was supposed to be a hilarious one, but the climax made it grim.
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    The reason I kept it short is because of my self...

    The reason I kept it short is because of my self critical behaviour. While reading any story mostly I lose my attention from the story if the narration is slow. So I didn't want that to happen with...
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    I have made a slight chance in climax, please...

    I have made a slight chance in climax, please reply if you feel this is better than the previous one.
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    I have made a slight change in the climax, please...

    I have made a slight change in the climax, please reply if you feel it's better than the previous one.
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    I am thinking of writing a new end which explains...

    I am thinking of writing a new end which explains the story more clearly as both you and 101 fountains and some of my friends whom I narrated the story found the end quite confusing.

    But for the...
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    I am afraid you got it wrong again.The climax is...

    I am afraid you got it wrong again.The climax is much deeper. It was the bungalow owner, men involved in corruption who bribed the police. Sarcastically I wanted to convey that they were forced to...
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    I am really glad you took so much interest in...

    I am really glad you took so much interest in this story.

    For the first robbery, I thought it was needless for me to explain about the other thief as for the bungalow owner the job was done. And...
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    Thank you very much. I am glad you liked it.

    Thank you very much. I am glad you liked it.
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    I have tried hard to avoid any more punctuation...

    I have tried hard to avoid any more punctuation errors. And the story is set in India, so there may be some confusion for you at first. Hope you read the story and like it.
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    Thanks for the reply. I will take care of it next...

    Thanks for the reply. I will take care of it next time. But I would like to know how you felt about the story.
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    Thanks a lot Lonesome Cowboy, it means a lot to me

    Thanks a lot Lonesome Cowboy, it means a lot to me
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    Hello everyone. This was my first short...

    Hello everyone. This was my first short story,which I had written long back. Please do reply, even if you feel it's terrible.
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    The Perfect Thief

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