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    Yes, it's much improved, including your combining...

    Yes, it's much improved, including your combining the classmate with the police officer who tells the story. That makes for a much smoother beginning. The ending is better, too, as your intention...
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    Nice to engage with you, Gaurav. Actually, I...

    Nice to engage with you, Gaurav. Actually, I lived in Mumbai form 1992-94, and had quite a bit of interaction with the Indian police during my stay. (The interaction was both good and bad. One...
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    Reminds me a lot of 1001 Nights, including the...

    Reminds me a lot of 1001 Nights, including the way you have framed the narrative as being told by a non-participant who heard it from someone else.
    There are a few minor things that can be...
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