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    I have to correct you on this part: Logic is...

    I have to correct you on this part: Logic is always important. What's happening may be silly, but it still needs to make sense internally, and you need to communicate that sense to your readers.
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    My thoughts: * I'm going to agree with you and...

    My thoughts:

    * I'm going to agree with you and disagree with 101 fountains about the three robberies you mentioned but didn't detail. If you felt they interfered with the story instead of adding...
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    I was unable to read it at the time; honest typos...

    I was unable to read it at the time; honest typos and grammar hiccups are one thing (we do have numerous non-native English speakers posting here), but that mess was more than I could force myself...
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    Would you go to a job interview looking like this...

    Would you go to a job interview looking like this story does? You need a line of whitespace between paragraphs and proper paragraph breaks (for example, between dialogue from different speakers). ...
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