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-My World of Fantasy

The orb looms,
buoyant beyond belief.
A part of my mind
yet not of the mind.

I look up
yet I don't catch a glimpse
of my lost friend.

I really enjoyed your poem. It struck me emotionally and I find the wording to be beautiful.

Thanks Robert! Game of thrones is one my favorite shows, so for it to remind you of the show(even a little) makes me happy.

-The Untamed Posture of Seven Kings

The seven kings that overlook the luminous cities
to the groveling grotto’s, can’t decide to who is the victor.
The toss of a coin usually decides the...

I honestly really enjoyed the flow of this. "But mostly some travel on gravity’s train" would have to be my favorite line of the piece.

-Contentment


The loving dashes on the trunk of a tree,
carved with such ineptitude as to leave it crying.
He sits with her staring into the unknown eyes of
foreign contentment.
The once...

-Loneliness


I can’t say my heart knows the difference between
being awake and being asleep.
I remain indifferent to the days that pass, these spliced images
remain in fragments.
How could I...

Thanks for the feedback. I had not intended them to build upon one another but that is interesting.

-A path of transformation


Could you mention the point?
Of all my understandings you stand out.
A point in which infinity is pulled. Encumbered.
Pushed aside as turmoils will.
Yet do my cries...

-Simmering Hollow

A golem swallowing me whole,
Just beyond the realm of feeling.
A place I dare not dwell.
For once consumed, all is forgotten.
A raging torrent of dispassionate voices, this...

-Mercy

The heart and the individual,
co-existing and co-creating.
Between one another, nothing can hinder this process.
I am big and you are small.
Truth and mercy.
If the balance isn’t...

-An Angel's Repoise

From this I emerge,
into a place of lifelessness.
Despair comes upon those who doubt repentance.
From this I soar in an angels paradise.
Kept locked beneath impending...

Let me know what you think/feel about them.

-Absence

I contend to you that a manner of expression,
includes within it the infinite potential of creativity.
This expression of absence I feel...

Thanks for the feedback, I really needed some help when I did the editing. I made a few simple changes based on your recommendations and it does sound a lot better.

I would love feedback.

-Passion

Sketch the perched bird on your balcony.
Help save a woman as she falls.
It gives you the ability to do remarkable things.
Touching your heart and intuition...

A Heroes Wrath(title change):


Francis, the captain, glared at the five boats impeding his ship's path. From his post at the helm of the ship he commands Steve to radio the coast guard. This...

I really enjoyed trying to get to the meaning of this one. Maybe a pyromaniac of sorts? My favorite line is "And with it, I'll immolate the world—"

Hello! After some very helpful info and some practice I have come to(what I think to be) my best poem. Please leave any insights or info that could help me progress!

(working title)

Each one...

Im glad you enjoyed it, it does give me encouragement to keep going just knowing some of you like it. Thank you for your kind words.

Absolutely loved it.

Thanks for the input! It is helping me understand poetry a bit more.

Hello, I have one of my first attempts at poetry. I just wanted to know all of your opinions on it.

A day on the beach.

The glimmering sand tells a story all its own. It tells you the story of...

Hello, I have recently started writing in my leisurely time and have come up with a couple of short stories. I'm looking for any tips or insight into how to improve my writing. I will gladly take...