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    Poll: I understand that you were not trying to be...

    I understand that you were not trying to be hostile. I simply wanted explanations for your criticisms. Thank you for breaking all of this down into layman's terms and for citing examples of my...
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    Poll: Wow. I had no idea this paper was such a mess....

    Wow. I had no idea this paper was such a mess. First of all, thank you for you input. Secondly, allow me to explain that I, in fact, am here in order to receive assistance in "brutally" editing this...
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    Poll: Haha you aren't completely incorrect in saying...

    Haha you aren't completely incorrect in saying that I have no direction. To be perfectly honest, I don't really know what I want to do with this either, though it would be pretty sweet to get it...
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    Poll: This needs work. Your help is requested.

    This was my final paper in a fiction writing class I was required to take as a part of my literature requirement (which I recently found lying around on my hard drive). Contrary to my initial...
  5. Thread: Wishbone

    by ubergookjr
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    Wishbone

    {{Walking down the street. People avoid my gaze. No one makes eye contact with me but I know they've been looking. I smell cigarettes. Victor is smoking again. He's been at it for five years. I'm...
  6. New here. Biology major. Wrote a few stories. Your feedback is requested. Thank you.

    The Woeful Samaritan

    You remember the hospital, don't you? Next to your school playground? Our family has quite a history there. Thirteen years ago, you were born here. Your mother and I walked...
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