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The Dying Game

I cant really paint a full picture of each incident but ill try my best.
Since I was very young, as far back as I could remember. I would constantly worry about my mum's health,...

I published this book on amazon after a professional elance editor edited it
I would like ur comments as rough as they maybe
its only the first 3 chapters but

Chapter 1

The young boy with...

thank u very much for the feed back, the illustration was done by a thai guy who took my original drawing and made it awesome, mine was cool too but just a sketch, his fb is in the book u can see in...

http://www.amazon.com/Tree-Boy-Life-Blood-Tom-ebook/dp/B00KKRUPQW/

amazon link if u wanna read the first few chapters

comments on my new book

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I'm a newbie, I want to publish my first book, i put an add on www.elance.com for editors

who would you go with? and why? there full profiles are on www.elance.com if you are interested

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The girl jumped to her feet with renewed vigour. "Lets go and finish this," she suddenly said wiping her eyes even though her tears had been instantly turned to stream the moment they were shed.
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I'm finished i just need it proofread and edited, which big house publisher can i used? I don't know any...

Can some recommend a very trustworthy company to proof read a 25000 word sci/fantasy novel

thank you so much for your help, i was walking blind until you helped me, i re-wrote the second chapter, i think its much better

The ending will blow ur mind!

And the second book will rub will take the story some where crazy I re-wrote the second chapter for u

I re-wrote the second chapter and am now working on the rest of the book

Chapter 2
Giant trees now surrounded them in all directions. The vast lush canopy above cast the forest into a deep...

just if you are interested i re-wrote the first chapter, u were right it was so much more emotionally engaging do what ever i did differently, i hope its better...

Chapter 1
The boy walked out...

Ty so so much! ! Ive haven't written any thing before, I can see your points clearly make sense.

This is a story th I used to tell my daughter, it was such a good story that I must put it on...

i uploaded the second chapter, could u recommend a company that i can pay for proofreading, i wanna self publish to amazon

Chapter 2
They had both walked so deep into the mountains that it was getting ridiculous.

Giant trees now surrounded them in all directions.

The girl knew that these woods were extremely...

Chapter 1
The boy walked across the grass oval while looking into the sun. The sunshine radiated his face.

He reached the exact centre of the oval and then stopped. He then did something that...