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  1. Thread: Serenade

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    I'm very impressed that you came up with a...

    I'm very impressed that you came up with a brilliant poem so quickly. I really appreciate your help.
    Sorry that your better half was offended by it! lol
  2. Thread: Serenade

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    Thanks for your valuable comments, Pompey! Will...

    Thanks for your valuable comments, Pompey! Will try and change the poem accordingly.
  3. Thread: Serenade

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    I would appreciate any comments. It doesn't flow...

    I would appreciate any comments. It doesn't flow too well..
  4. Thread: Serenade

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    Serenade

    The Arctic Ocean was alive with music
    Young male walruses practised serenading a sweetheart
    They rehearsed for hours in quartets and quintets
    But Sylvia looked away and sighed
    She was looking...
  5. Thread: Like deja vu

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    Thank you Cacian! I appreciate your advice and...

    Thank you Cacian! I appreciate your advice and have changed it accordingly.
  6. Thread: Like deja vu

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    You're like deja vu I've seen your face before...

    You're like deja vu
    I've seen your face before somewhere
    Your words are familiar like an echo from long ago


    Does this sound better than the original 1st verse?
  7. Thread: Like deja vu

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    Like deja vu

    You're like deja vu
    I've seen your face before somewhere
    Your words are familiar like an echo from long ago

    As if you knew my mother
    My sister and brother
    You're like deja vu

    I watch you...
  8. Thread: The inventor

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    Thank you Yalash for your kind comments and peace...

    Thank you Yalash for your kind comments and peace be on you too!
  9. Thread: 5 minute poem

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    Thanks for your comments Hawkman. It was a 5...

    Thanks for your comments Hawkman. It was a 5 minute exercise in a poetry workshop.
  10. Thread: 5 minute poem

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    Fidelity as a woodland animal Fidelity would...

    Fidelity as a woodland animal

    Fidelity would not be a skunk
    It would not stink
    It would be a deer
    Its fragrance musk
    The sweet scent of fidelity
    It's true dear
  11. Thread: 5 minute poem

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    5 minute poem

    I would propose to you
    In Sutton library
    Surrounded by books
    I'd pick one at random
    And read a romantic line
    To get you in the mood perhaps?
    If you declined
    I could sit in my usual spot
    And...
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    I only explained the origin of Iggy's name...

    I only explained the origin of Iggy's name because it was not a name. Apparently Brooke is unisex but much more commonly a female name.
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    Thanks very much for suggestions and comments...

    Thanks very much for suggestions and comments Calidore, DATo and 108 fountains. You've certainly given me some ideas!
    The last paragraph was an afterthought 108 fountains so it's interesting that...
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    This is my attempt at an environmental thriller...

    This is my attempt at an environmental thriller in flash fiction format. Comments would be greatly appreciated.
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    The tranquil forest

    It was quiet, green and peaceful. The four boys sat on the ground in the middle of the forest in the dappled sunlight. A smooth, round rock stood in the centre of the clearing. A bird perched high up...
  16. Thread: Black and white

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    Indeed it does, thank-you Pumpkin337

    Indeed it does, thank-you Pumpkin337
  17. Thread: Black and white

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    Uncanny!!

    Uncanny!!
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    I loved your story, especially the humour. The...

    I loved your story, especially the humour. The diplopia and optician advert are cleverly woven in.
  19. Thread: Black and white

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    I did love Tales of the Unexpected! I know poison...

    I did love Tales of the Unexpected! I know poison in a cup of tea isn't an original idea but it is set in the 1940s
  20. Thread: Black and white

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    Thank you kindly for your comments Pumpkin337. I...

    Thank you kindly for your comments Pumpkin337. I hadn't thought of Poe but am interested you thought of the cat as the killer. Black cats have a particularly mysterious and knowing look about them......
  21. Thread: Black and white

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    Thank you 108 fountains. I really appreciate your...

    Thank you 108 fountains. I really appreciate your advice and I have to watch Dragnet now!
    I've made a few changes to stop it sounding misleading.
  22. Thread: Black and white

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    Black and white

    It was a dark November evening in 1947. A man carrying a briefcase and umbrella tipped his hat at his neighbour who was also on his way home. All the bay windows in the street were dimly lit or not...
  23. Thread: Twilight

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    Twilight

    The blue expanse deepened
    And the white dreamy clouds of morn were merely darker patches in the sky
    The sky turned from one shade of sapphire to another
    Until the deepest bluest blue spread...
  24. Thread: Mr. Zinc's

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    Loved your story. You had alot of fun vit that!

    Loved your story. You had alot of fun vit that!
  25. Thread: Black and white

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    They took it to forensics. So far the signs had...

    They took it to forensics. So far the signs had pointed to a professional pet kidnapping so unsurprisingly no fingerprints were found. No damage had been done to the collar, nor was there any blood...
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