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    may be he isnt " Prince Charming, the Koh-i-Noor...

    may be he isnt " Prince Charming, the Koh-i-Noor and Jesus Christ" for us but may be he is for the main character and that is why the attachment was strong, not all people have the same ways of...
  2. Thread: Morning

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    I think he didnt tell the readers the main...

    I think he didnt tell the readers the main chatracter's name and also the kind of dream he is working to achieve as a kind of suspension
  3. Thread: midnight

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    yes, sure I liked it

    yes, sure I liked it
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    Sticky: Prejudice is the child of ignorance

    Prejudice is the child of ignorance
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    i liked the idea but the poetic sense is strange

    i liked the idea but the poetic sense is strange
  6. Thread: midnight

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    I liked it and can simply say it is soft

    I liked it and can simply say it is soft
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    I agree with hill, the first 8 lines were great...

    I agree with hill, the first 8 lines were great but then the poem started to fade, I am not a good judge at poetry , and I myself not good ar writing poetry but the good things impose themselves as...
  8. Thread: The Kiss

    by Dreamsqueen
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    I liked the story, the style of writing, the...

    I liked the story, the style of writing, the descriptions, and yes the backgrounds of the characters maske us encouraged to read more, it is a nice story
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    I think it was predestined that Eve and Adamd eat...

    I think it was predestined that Eve and Adamd eat of the forbidden apple, in order that they live on earth instead of heaven and thus, life goes on and on as it destined
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    A good lesson at the end of the story, in my...

    A good lesson at the end of the story, in my country we have a provers that means " Smile open all locked doors"
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    I dont think describing " david" is something...

    I dont think describing " david" is something extra or not necessary, its function here is to show the reader why the main character was so attached to him, of course there are many reasons that...
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    I think the key for good writing is good reading,...

    I think the key for good writing is good reading, read , read and read then decide what is the field that you can write in " like romance, sience fiction" or so, and if you get stuck with ideas, dont...
  13. Thread: laughter

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    those who can draw their smiles while their tears...

    those who can draw their smiles while their tears struggle to roll down are great for giving hope that whatever badness you face, still there is goodness
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    Poll: Tess of the D'urbevilles " is a great novel and...

    Tess of the D'urbevilles " is a great novel and it shows all the miseries that Tess underwent and provoked her to kill at the end, she might be right or wrong in this for some but her life was a real...
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    as it is known, no one is perfect but if we...

    as it is known, no one is perfect but if we compare elizabeth with other characters, it will be perfect, and what I most liked is her complete refusal to be treated in a low way " if i can say so"...
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    I agree with you that faith is something and...

    I agree with you that faith is something and trust is something else, and yes, once you lose your trust in someone, it is appreximately impossible to retain it again
    but in my personal belief, faith...
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    Poll: it is true what you said "it is truly about how...

    it is true what you said "it is truly about how the British society at the time was presented" but most of the novels are like this , for example, sense and sensibility too
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    faith isnt culture, faith isnot changeable, it is...

    faith isnt culture, faith isnot changeable, it is something so strong and cant be easily removed or changed, or it will not be called faith.
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    silence can be so meaningful some times and at...

    silence can be so meaningful some times and at other times it makes us lose alot, sometimes you need to be silent, because some words lose their glory when they are said, other times, silence should...
  20. Thread: For you

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    thanks all for your comments.

    thanks all for your comments.
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    yes, it needs more details but personally,...

    yes, it needs more details but personally, discussing the issue involved, I think that nothing in the world, nomatter how hard and tough it is, should make us think of killing ourselves, yet it is a...
  22. Thread: For you

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    For you

    Hi, I am new in the forum and here I post one of my few poems, hope you like it, all critique is welcomed

    For the one I most loved
    for whom I most trust
    For who gave me the might
    for who showed...
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    reply to story

    your story is good, you have a mistake or two at the beginning but the way you described the feelings is good
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    reponse to story

    I am new in the forum but I like reading and literature so much, I read the story and I liked the descriptions, and it attract us to read more
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    "On a fine Morning." Thomas Hardt Whence comes...

    "On a fine Morning." Thomas Hardt

    Whence comes solace? Not from seeing,
    What is doing, suffering, being;
    Not from noting Life’s conditions,
    Not from heeding Time’s monitions;
    But in cleaving...
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