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It's been awhile since I posted! Here's the first draft of something new I concocted.
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Matthew Lindgren was twelve years old the first time his mother hit...

Sophie lowered her binoculars and nodded to her boyfriend. "Okay, I think we can make it to that little town well before sunset." She smiled. "See? We made it in time, you old worrywart."

Her...

Hi, everyone. I've got another short story to share. I'm concerned that the 2nd half is too slow and info-dumpy compared to the first half, and that it doesn't have enough tension or drama. Please...

Thanks, bro. Good to know that I haven't rusted on original fiction. (I mainly write fanfiction) I will post another story soon, too.

Hi, everyone. It's been quite a while since I posted something here, but I've written some new fiction and I'm ready to share. This is my first new submission. It's a short, soft sci-fi humor piece...

Hello,

thanks for the response. I suppose this story does need a bit of work, but then again, this is only the first draft. Later on I'll be sure to make some edits.

A Night on the Earth

A comedy by Ulquiorra9000

An earthling, or a human citizen of planet Earth, might consider Mr. Glorck Veladian an “alien”, an “invader from outer space” or a “little green...

Thanks for the response, Aunt Shecky. Normally I do the "in media res" method for subsequent chapters in a story but for a pilot chapter I like to start things more slowly so I don't have to do too...

Brave New World


by Ulquiorra9000

Chapter IV: Visions

It was already evening by the time Nick disembarked from the taxi carriage in the suburbs of his home city, and the sword for hire...

Brave New World


by Ulquiorra9000

Chapter III: Sword for Hire

As spring wore on, the warm, humid weather of the colony world grew even hotter and the crew of the Waveskimmer often found...

Thanks for your support, cafolini :)

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Brave New World

by Ulquiorra9000

Chapter II: Fall From Grace

Hello everyone. It's been a while since I posted here, so I've come back with a new young adult fantasy novel that I've started. This is chapter 1, and I'll post more chapters later as I write the...

I have sold the copyrights to this story and it needs to be taken down by a moderator as soon as possible. Thanks!

This story is open to constructive criticism as well as any other kind comments. :) Please enjoy!

IMAGINARY HELL

Conrad Veers braced himself against the whirlwind as a silver and blue...

I would like to have this thread deleted.

Thanks for replying, guys. This is a poem I wrote for my college poetry class and my classmates peer-reviewed it, but here I've received some advice that my classmates didn't think of. What you see...

Rows of pixels glare at me
and their collective bright lights
sear my retinas and melt my brain
until my head begs for relief.
256 colors flash across my Kindle
behind their tarp of plastic and...

Black clouds writhe and rain stampedes
on the slick wooden deck.
The mast creaks and groans
in protest.

Men shout and scream,
their voices whispers in the stormy din.
The oak vessel pitches...

Nenevah countryside,
Nenevah Kingdom,
October 8, 536 A.F.

"Oh, for goodness sake, Allen. It's getting late," Bellany argued. She, Allen, and Jaque were out in the wilderness of the Nenevah...

Chapter III: Alliance

Volcano shores, Ranan coastline,
Ranan Kingdom,
October 6, 536 A.F.
Fierce, inhuman orange eyes glared wetly at the hundreds of merfolk assembled here tonight off the...

Hi Jacobi,

thanks for responding and for liking what I've got so far! Yes, a few issues in chapter 1 were kind of rushed, but there was a lot to put in there and I don't like really long chapters....

Throne room, Ranan Castle,
Ranan Kingdom,
October 1, 536 A.F.

Queen Lizeth and King Hurgom never grew tired of admiring the splendor of the Ranan castle's throne room. This hall was supported by...

ORBS OF POWER

Chapter II: Consequences

Staff wing, Nenevah Castle,
Nenevah Kingdom,
September 26, 536 A.F.

"Jaque! I know you're in there. You were summoned to attend the emergency talks...

Thanks for liking! Yes, I admit that I don't have the faintest inkling how little kids think. I was kind of guessing. There aren't any young kids in my life >_>

Matthew was only six years old, but he knew that he loved his little goldfish, the beautiful sea animal that drifted around in its tank in his room. He had never named it because he couldn't think of...