I enjoyed the story on a lot of levels, most notably originality! It flows great and I enjoyed the dialog. I did think it could use a touch bit more of world building. For example, I had hard time...
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I enjoyed the story on a lot of levels, most notably originality! It flows great and I enjoyed the dialog. I did think it could use a touch bit more of world building. For example, I had hard time...
Just a note to say I enjoyed the story. Great job of conveying the melancholy feelings of the character. On a side note, I also enjoyed the details concerning the church and the imaging provided.