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  1. Clipped Wings - Opinions Appreciated

    Hello,

    As the title says but really I wanted to share a poem that I have written. I originally titled it 'Twenty-Six' but then I thought that title might not really be expressive of the poem.
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  2. Thank you everyone for your warm and helpful...

    Thank you everyone for your warm and helpful comments.

    The someone I meant was me and I needed a little boost to really start writing out a novel I had in mind for a long long time. It has been...
  3. Opinions: Does this intro for a story sound interesting? would make you read it?!

    As the title reads :) Please help if you can it would mean a lot to someone.

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    If you were really a true native Otium fellow you know better than to rise during the early...
  4. Thread: Grape

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    Superman folds his cape And coldly judges me....

    Superman folds his cape
    And coldly judges me.
    Gentlemen, it is no grape:
    I am a victim of society.

    Those lines are really unique I love them! I would just point out that in between those lines...
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    The first 4 lines really put me into this poem....

    The first 4 lines really put me into this poem. From my own reading of the story I can see someone who is trying to get his partner to say these three words but time had been ungraceful to the...
  6. Opinions Requested! Perhaps a beginner's attempt (Story Plot)

    Ah nvm I just removed it :) Maybe when its better.
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    Actually I really prefer replies like this, thank...

    Actually I really prefer replies like this, thank you. :)
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    Futile Delusion.+

    Hello everyone,

    Not the adept writer, nor the smartest pea in the pod, but this is something I wrote and I'd like to share. From time to time it is nice to get opinions and see some critisim, as...
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    My only problem is that everything I want to jot...

    My only problem is that everything I want to jot down happens to be something I read somewhere, saw somewhere or heard somewhere, so originality can be a little hard to spot.

    Thank you for your...
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    Thanks for your opinions, it is great. No real...

    Thanks for your opinions, it is great. No real outcome would come if someone doesn't get some critisim every once in a while.

    It is not that I do not read, I've read so much from shakespeare to...
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    I thought it might not be clear what this is but:...

    I thought it might not be clear what this is but:
    This will be the "confusing" start of a piece of story that I am writing. It is meant to confuse the reader to what the story may be about, a...
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    Something short: opinions matter!

    Sometimes when someone writes something, only the writer can understand what the text is about. I want to post what's below and if possible recieve opinions on what the "text means" or if it makes...
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    I always like to go back in time and look at what...

    I always like to go back in time and look at what I wrote a few years back. It astounds me that sometimes nothing has changed, or did everything change? I wonder..

    Sorry for the very random reply....
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    White Sheets

    Hello,

    Feel free to critisize whatever is written. This is just personal poetry that I would like to share with other people.

    White Sheets

    Flipping on those white sheets
    I see my face in...
  15. Comments Appreciated .+Somewhere Here.+

    I used to always write poetry to whatever I could see that appalled me. It has been a long time since I ever written something, because I think as I grew older I lost the time I had. Last time I...
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    Thanks for your replies guys :) I've already...

    Thanks for your replies guys :) I've already formed a list and I'll post it for in future need of them:


    Tom Waits – Romeo Is Bleeding
    Bon Jovi – I’d Die For You
    Semisonic – Singing In My...
  17. "Richard slipped his heavy engagement ring back...

    "Richard slipped his heavy engagement ring back onto his finger, and scrolled up through the text document, satisfied with a solid day’s writing. Several hours has passed in a blissful daze of...
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    That's an amazing story : ) And if it is true,...

    That's an amazing story : ) And if it is true, then I'm damm sure you have made a difference. Sometimes it's the existence of once person that understands you and can connect with you that gives you...
  19. Thread: Help

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    Interesting research, wish we had some of that...

    Interesting research, wish we had some of that here :/

    I think Snape acted the way he did, because even if Lily had rejected him, his feelings for her never went away. He was jealous and angry at...
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    'Romeo and Juliet' in songs~

    Hello!

    I've been looking around for songs about Romeo and Juliet n__n, it is part of an assignment but I can't seem to find as many :/

    I have chosen the following:
    Taylor Swift - Love Story...
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    Romeo and Juliet Adaptations~

    mm does any1 know any literature piece where a writer used Romeo and Juliet as part of his theme?

    I'd be more than glad to find about that : D so please do reply :X annnnnd so on so forth xD
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  22. Thread: Story

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    lmao that's a really good poem and a nice story,...

    lmao that's a really good poem and a nice story, good jobs!!
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    omg I think that's nice!! I would try to change...

    omg I think that's nice!!
    I would try to change some of the vocabulary, but I so admire what you did there!

    And in the end, when the puzzle pieces gather up, and the few lines where you have said...
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    I always admire those that write to something...

    I always admire those that write to something they've seen and just felt like writing about.

    that's actually good, nice job : )
  25. Anthologies: Theme Picking and Mini-Samples!

    I am required to pick a theme for an anthology but I am very confused. I cannot seem to make up my mind about any sort of theme, and by the end of the day I'm left with nothing but many poems and a...
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