Okay, I've just updated it again. I think that I've rewritten the last bit alright, but tell me if you think it needs changing again. I also made it more obvious in the beginning that it was the...
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Okay, I've just updated it again. I think that I've rewritten the last bit alright, but tell me if you think it needs changing again. I also made it more obvious in the beginning that it was the...
Thank you both for your compliments and criticism, I will try to implement your feedback into both my current and future writings.
I'm trying to sculpt this as a "scary" piece for Halloween, it's...
He kept his eyes down, for fear of having to talk to another human being. And, from his understanding, everyone trys to make some sort of conversation. After all, people are nervous creatures, and...