Congratulations North Star!
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Congratulations North Star!
Her shadow haunts her waking dreams
Broken fragments of her soul scream
Illuminated darkness hides the past
From choices of a lot she didn’t cast
Bitter and broken, consistently abandoned...
Wonderful piece by concept, If anything I would play with the structure of your stanzas and the regard to what person you are writing in. Using both his, and her give the imagery of a third person...
These seem to build upon one another and could almost build one very complex piece. Simmering Hollow would be the one that captivated my interest the most. The imagery it paints is both dark, and...
I loved this in your piece! Wonderful work and thank you for sharing!
Cassie that made one of my all time favorites on Litnet! I absolutely loved it, and the spin you took with it....
Thank you :)
2 weeks from the end of this round would be May 4th...
“So this is how liberty dies…with thunderous applause.” – Padmé Amidala
Lets go with Liberty Dies as the topic and May the...
...Silence...
With every word left unspoken
They built a house of destruction
Screaming in silence
As they fulfill their penance
Yet remorse resounds hollow
From promises they just...
This flows very well, though I do agree it seems to cut off abruptly, perhaps another line or two?
It would seem many of the "old timers" are returning. Welcome back Bakiryu & NikolaiI I returned earlier this month. How have y'all been?
Happy Easter <3
I am taking an interpersonal communication class and have returned to my trusted litnet as an alternative to the "chat rooms" found elsewhere for this task. I need 3 adults that work full time to...
No worry about being crushing JonathanB (she) can handle it :) I forget that my frequent long absences leave me a stranger to many here. I enjoy things that challenge my faith- The resurrection is...
The concept of Adam having a first wife, and Eve not being the first woman is of interest.
I have found the church, and those in the church to steadfast refuse any notion that Lilith might have...
The majority of their works probably 3, a few of their works several.
How many movies have you watched this week
Poison ivy perhaps...
If you could have a super sense but the cost was to completely loose another sense would you do it and what would be your choices?
867
How many social media accounts do you have?
That would be the story of my life- yes.
Would you own a dinosaur
Nay- nothing says fun like drowning...
Live on a private island?
PAM changed their avatar since last I was on 0.0
30ish?
How many countries have you visited?
Yes.
Would you change your Name if you could, and to what?
Nay
Live at Disney World?
9631
Grand Canyon adventure with my favorite little man <3
Did
Wasp or Spiders, which is worse
Nay- I prefer to work alone
Cotton Candy