let go in the darkness
and
fall into the light
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let go in the darkness
and
fall into the light
I really like the simplicity of your poetry.
And glad to see you posting, M4ngo! :)
In a grand-stillness uncertainty slips
inspiring the moment and losing its grip—
leaving shadows in a bucket of sun
collapsing my thoughts left undone
I agree,
there is something
particularly special
—about you
how else
could you replicate
the same feeling
I get
when craving
ice cream
in the
middle
of the night
when I switch
on the light
to the kitchen
and I’m greeted
by the biggest
cockroach
I've ever seen
Fun little poem... enjoyed. Perhaps "replicate" as a noun: "a tone one or more octaves above or below the given tone."
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
Duplicate bug... with long hairy antennae.
silver light
unfolds at night
unbracing
as you fall—
stealing away the curtain
your disguise
now dripping shade
Simple and effective
Lovely, just lovely. Some beautiful imagery and turn of phrase here. Your haikus are delightful snippets of depth.
In particular like sad leaves and Write my Name in Solitude
Thank ya’ll for the comments, much appreciated!
Keep at it. It's very pleasing to absorb.
beyond the edge
of revelations—
sunlight drapes
linger on
Wonderful... Veils of light beyond revelation... almost within reach :)
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor