The Mighty River!

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From the Mountains to the Sea
Everybody enjoys it when they see
But still the joy is pathetic
Because it is not authentic
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A man comes and dies
His life filled with sorrows and lies
But with my flow, I capture
Beautifying God's own nature
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Never did i hinder
Come to me and i will be a helper
Clean your soul with my holy shower
It's me, The Mighty River

- An ode to the great River Ganga in India.

Very beautiful; thanks so much for sharing it with us.

Hope to see more of your poetry in the future!

glorious feeling and a picture to accent the mighty flow of your hand!

Thanks a lot NikholaiI and Delta40. Youv'e raised my morale and now thinking of joining the poetry contest.

Thnaks again!

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Originally Posted by adityasam

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From the Mountains to the Sea
Everybody enjoys it when they see
But still the joy is pathetic
Because it is not authentic
________________________________

A man comes and dies
His life filled with sorrows and lies
But with my flow, I capture
Beautifying God's own nature
________________________________

Never did i hinder
Come to me and i will be a helper
Clean your soul with my holy shower
It's me, The Mighty River

- An ode to the great River Ganga in India.

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A soul cleansing river
Indeed it is!

Wash all the sorrows and lies
Of all mankind.

A best handy man
Of the Maker, in fact.

Looks like the rivers of home here in Gold country... beautiful.

I particularly enjoyed the last stanza.

Thank you for sharing.

Thanks again angliholic and even your words are beautiful to read.

Thank you tailor!

Very nice indeed. Keep writing such beautiful poetry. Good Luck