there was passion
in the beginning
and now it has turned
a lesson
love is made out to feel
out of fashion
constant without
a question
has ran out of emotions
it is lost on repercussion.
doubt astonish
it has become a stoic
it thrives under
heroic.
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there was passion
in the beginning
and now it has turned
a lesson
love is made out to feel
out of fashion
constant without
a question
has ran out of emotions
it is lost on repercussion.
doubt astonish
it has become a stoic
it thrives under
heroic.
Enjoyed this little offering.... the title throws me off a little bit though.
This is how I scanned it with line breaks:
"there was passion
in the beginning
and now it has turned
a lesson
love is made out to feel
out of fashion
constant without
a question
has ran out of emotions
it is lost on repercussion.
doubt
astonish
it has become
a stoic
it thrives under
heroic"
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
.....
taitor STATELY many thanks for reading and the feedback. I liked the way you scanned it. :)Quote:
Originally Posted by tailor STATELY
Sorry about the title. I could not think of what to put so I just put
strict
instead.
Loved this poem, cacian!
Danik thank you. :)