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Bar,
It is a game of words..."by heart" I was referring to the "live/emotional" content of some verses from your poem.
And by the way it would be an honor to have your opinion - whatever is - on my THE GREATEST LIGHT (There's No World was the old title). Poem that was selected by a fine site "specialised" on mystic poetry - which may explain the silence around it here...perhaps this isn't the most convenient place to expose it... ;-)
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A far cry from 'Drink To Me Only With Thine Eyes' *, or is it? Quite a ride, your poem. I had to hold on, but greatly enjoyed it.
*Ben Johnson's 'Sorry. To Celia.'
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I'll drink to you Bar, if I had something other then coffee. <3
I enjoyed this a lot, though I would replace the comma before "dry and black." with a "–"
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Jeos, I'll look for your poem and will tell you.
ampoule, "Drink To Me Only With Thine Eyes" is a great poem which I didn't know about, I confess, Hawk brought my attention to it. Thanks for having held on till the end...!
Revolte, glad you enjoyed and "drunk to me!" I'll ponder your suggestion.
Thanks to all again.