Three People Haiku

How bout....

today comes too soon
love seems to have its effect
lovers who must part

today comes too soon
mists of memory lingers
mind's dark recesses

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Originally Posted by mazHur

Janine, you do read me well! Are you a 'phrenologist'?:)

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hahaha..I am not sure I am that cerebral....what exactly is a phrenologist anyway...is that someone who studies brains or head shapes...duh? :lol:

LoL :lol:
And nice finishes, Janine. :)

Tiger lilies sway

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Originally Posted by Janine

hahaha..I am not sure I am that cerebral....what exactly is a phrenologist anyway...is that someone who studies brains or head shapes...duh? :lol:

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For knowing more about phrenology, and for vocal convenience, you will have to bring your ear close to my mouth! :) ;)

Tiger lilies sway
Dappling more tender blossoms

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Originally Posted by mazHur

For knowing more about phrenology, and for vocal convenience, you will have to bring your ear close to my mouth! :) ;)

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ou la la.........:lol:


Tiger lilies sway
Dappling more tender blossoms
In fragrant twilight

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LoL
And nice finishes, Janine

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Kiz, thanks and I love your first line above! Glad you are back in Haiku's. I see you were up late last night.

In fragrant twilight
moth whispered into the ear
of the flower-love!

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Originally Posted by mazHur

In fragrant twilight
moth whispered into the ear
of the flower-love!

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mazHur, I am wild about your new Haiku; but I hate to inform you - we are in 3
Person Haiku - oops that brain of yours got mixed up again with your heart. :lol:

Just use your last line as the new one......

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Originally Posted by Janine

mazHur, I am wild about your new Haiku; but I hate to inform you - we are in 3
Person Haiku - oops that brain of yours got mixed up again with your heart. :lol:

Just use your last line as the new one......

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I am sooo sorry, Janine and all here...for the brief 'fits' of romance that i am having!! Please forgive me for that !!;)

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Originally Posted by mazHur

I am sooo sorry, Janine and all here...for the brief 'fits' of romance that i am having!! Please forgive me for that !!;)

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It's ok, mazhur....hey, dream on.....it's cyberspace. I will take the liberty to post that last line of yours since it's quite lovely.....

Line by mazHur

of the flower-love

Mine added

of the flower-love
D.H.Lawrence embraced thoughts

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Originally Posted by Janine

It's ok, mazhur....hey, dream on.....it's cyberspace. I will take the liberty to post that last line of yours since it's quite lovely.....

of the flower-love
D.H.Lawrence embraced thoughts

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blossoms free, natural

lovely haiku...I have taken the liberty to use your extemporaneous 3rd line as can't think of a better one!:)



'dream on as you will'

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Originally Posted by mazHur

blossoms free, natural

lovely haiku...I have taken the liberty to use your extemporaneous 3rd line as can't think of a better one!:)



'dream on as you will'

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Hahah...now we really did it! Just use that line as my last one. I forgot too and started to finish the haiku but then edited it. I must have been too slow...:lol:

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Originally Posted by Janine

Hahah...now we really did it! Just use that line as my last one. I forgot too and started to finish the haiku but then edited it. I must have been too slow...:lol:

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haha! What are we upto? Romanticizing, you too?:)

Always romanticizing.....DHL fan! hhaha.....so here is the complete poem.....

of the flower-love
D.H.Lawrence embraced thoughts
blossoms free, natural

spring buds cause sneezing