the heart is for taking away,,

like kites on flight, entangled
one has to go down
for the other to soar high
my life-thread broken
i take a dip
thrash my heart on a tree branch
i went down
i donno where i left my heart
whether the other kite plucked from me
or my heart got pinned on the pointed branch
for it pained when going down
i donno where i left my heart
i lost it somewhere on the way
i sink into the muddy sand

[some blood and sand splashed on the kite
funny design, someone who saw the kite said]

how true tagore said,
the heart is for taking away,,


have u ever flied a kite?
u know what happens when you fly with another kite..
the threads get tangled, in a mess
unless one is cut off,
it will be doom for both..
life is like that..
you go high with someone
but if u dont heed
life can be a mess
it can cost you so much of life!!

well i wrote this after a kite fest at goa,,
it was amusing
but i found some things were akin to the
plight i had in my own life..

Very interesting write with some amazing images. I really enjoyed the read, thank you.

Take care........Sue