Can Anybody Help To Check My Short Strategy Essay?

I write a short essay 1200 words about strategic planning. Alought I think i clearly expree my opion, but I am not self-confident. because I a english learner, and i was confusued with english academic writing as well as the logic in essay. furthurmore, if i fail in essay, i can not continue my study.

I have get at least 65 with my essay!

can anybody help me to check my essay about academic construction, whether the reasons can support the thesis and my grammar. Pls give me some suggestions?

if can, please leave your email,MSN or Skype, and I will send my essay
tou you.

Or you can send email to me "[email protected]", so that I can contact you!

thousands thanks

Hi Alinaalina,
You could actually post it in Literature Network and am sure i can help you with suggestions.
- Soumya

As soumyakans has suggested, you may post your essay here for public reviewing and comments. I would be more than happy to offer any advice to help you improve. Enjoy the forums both of you and have a nice day :D