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    10-11-2019, 09:00 AM
    I am trying understand the various points/ideas of this theory and so would like some point of views on it. Anything added or discussed is most...
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    10-09-2019, 08:55 AM
    cacian replied to a thread Six Game Reboot in Forum Games
    1. Say the Next Word: ideal 2. Two Word Game: big house 3. Word Association Game: wilderness - 4. Song Title Game: in between days -The Cure...
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    10-09-2019, 02:46 AM
    cacian replied to a thread Food Chain game in Forum Games
    egg on toast with cheese and paprika
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    10-08-2019, 03:40 AM
    cacian replied to a thread Food Chain game in Forum Games
    sweet potato mash
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    10-08-2019, 03:21 AM
    cacian replied to a thread Six Game Reboot in Forum Games
    1. Say the Next Word: dainty 2. Two Word Game: brick wall 3. Word Association Game: pets 4. Song Title Game: In My Mind - Dynoro & Gigi...
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    10-07-2019, 02:56 AM
    cacian replied to a thread strict in Personal Poetry
    Danik thank you. :)
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    10-04-2019, 08:30 AM
    Happy Birthday Manichean and best wishes.:bday_2: :cheers2:
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    10-04-2019, 08:26 AM
    cacian replied to a thread strict in Personal Poetry
    taitor STATELY many thanks for reading and the feedback. I liked the way you scanned it. :) Sorry about the title. I could not think of what to put...
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    10-03-2019, 07:04 AM
    cacian started a thread strict in Personal Poetry
    there was passion in the beginning and now it has turned a lesson love is made out to feel out of fashion constant without a question has...
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    10-03-2019, 02:41 AM
    cacian replied to a thread Six Game Reboot in Forum Games
    1. Say the Next Word:alternative 2. Two Word Game: great idea 3. Word Association Game: retrieve 4. Song Title Game: Up Up & Away - Fifth...
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    10-02-2019, 02:52 PM
    cacian replied to a thread Age in Personal Poetry
    An interesting piece here Pensive to reflect on. :)
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    10-02-2019, 02:44 PM
    cacian replied to a thread subtle in Personal Poetry
    Pensive great to see you around. Thank you for reading :)
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    09-30-2019, 01:55 PM
    cacian replied to a thread higher in Personal Poetry
    tailor STATELY thank you for reading and yes it is the correct interpretation. :)
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    09-30-2019, 01:54 PM
    cacian replied to a thread higher in Personal Poetry
    Hello there Danik and thank you for reading. I mispelled: irk and not urk from irksome pire means worse
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    09-27-2019, 05:23 PM
    cacian started a thread higher in Personal Poetry
    love is meticulous when it chooses immaculate over particulars perfection is an art for worst part an amulet it eventually runs out of...
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    09-27-2019, 05:35 AM
    Quite an impressive and interesting piece I see quite a couple of french words/expressions. Not sure of: immer,immer? Thank you for posting...
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    09-27-2019, 03:21 AM
    cacian replied to a thread Food Chain game in Forum Games
    nutty flavoured youghurt
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    09-27-2019, 03:19 AM
    cacian replied to a thread Six Game Reboot in Forum Games
    1. Say the Next Word: arrival 2. Two Word Game:good news 3. Word Association Game: paradise 4. Song Title Game: The Way You Look Tonight -...
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    09-22-2019, 05:22 AM
    cacian started a thread light in Personal Poetry
    honesty can be cruel to those who give it less rule the mind can be fooled to believe it is there to make it feel good the all admits it only...
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    09-20-2019, 06:53 AM
    cacian replied to a thread imagine in Personal Poetry
    tailor many thanks for reading. :)
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    09-19-2019, 03:26 PM
    cacian replied to a thread Six Game Reboot in Forum Games
    1. Say the Next Word: online 2. Two Word Game: great idea 3. Word Association Game:LOL I get it I did not even know I did that...... Pennies ...
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    09-19-2019, 03:41 AM
    cacian replied to a thread Food Chain game in Forum Games
    houmous dip with carrot and celery sticks
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    09-19-2019, 03:16 AM
    cacian started a thread subtle in Personal Poetry
    desire reduces stress it is the combination of interest happy it cares and the emotional inquest it has countless imaginations ready to...
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    09-19-2019, 03:02 AM
    cacian replied to a thread Calculated in Personal Poetry
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    09-19-2019, 03:01 AM
    cacian replied to a thread Calculated in Personal Poetry
    Hello there Adolescent and nice to see you posting again :) This is an interesting piece and speaks volume of modern life. I am still working the ...
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    Yes, a martial artist, well, when I'm not busy writing my thesis.

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    Lol I wasn't referring to the '&' with your poem Jeos since you didn't use it and I'll believe your statement about William Blake. I do have some of his poetry tucked away on my dusty bookcase. Yes I'm sagitarrius. Is that an issue?
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    Jeos,
    There are no rules to modern poetry so you didn't break any. You just happened to write a rather poor poem. Heaven knows what those on the other site saw in it to praise it so highly.
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    - Well then, you should be more specific, regarding 1)
    - 'psychosomatic' being generally accepted as 'disorder', had you used 'test' instead, your explanation would have been clearer...
    - Your lady is not influenced by the symbol, but by what it represents; by the way I had no idea you spoke of a particular lady in your poem! plus, your triple Sss shows me you yourself seem to be intensely influenced by the Ssserpent... the good news is that in most traditions the serpent represents knowledge, healing, DNA, never ending growth! Be well, Jeos.
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    Great, thank you!!!!!
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    I'm full of respect for your search, of course, and do agree "there is an unwordly wisdom behind words and poetry might be the ideal vehicle to transmit it." I myself strive to achieve that mastery, rather an impossible dream for someone without a mother tongue. So my aspirations must be modest. Besides, I have so little time to write...
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    Jeos, welcome on the Forum and on my thread. I'm honoured you have posted your poem with mine on this thread, but in order to get feedbacks and critiques from our friends here, the best idea is to post your poem in a separate thread. Just click on "New Thread" (you'll see it on the top of the Forum's thread list) and copy/paste your poem with your name and avatar next to it. As soon as you do, I'll write a comment and, I trust, other poets around will do the same, especially if you need help and encouragement (we all do).
    Welcome again here! good luck with your poetry and life! I'm also envious you can read Pessoa in original!!!!
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