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Yesterday, 06:35 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread true best in Personal Poetry

My pleasure.

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Yesterday, 06:33 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread Devil's Bride. in Personal Poetry

Some of your sentence structures have been dominated by rhyme as they are forced. An example of this is: As he stopped and his eyes on me cast....

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Yesterday, 06:22 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread Paris and rain and a candlelight dinner in Personal Poetry

I loved S3 Dieter. Although the use of two 'outs' so closely together makes me think the expression could be written more smoothly.

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Yesterday, 06:00 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread Playwriting in Personal Poetry

Thank you everyone.

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Yesterday, 03:41 PM

hillwalker replied to a thread Fate Was A Daughter. in Personal Poetry

I got as far as the second line and gave up. Poetry - not even close. On a different note - why are all your posts in bold. The font doesn't make...

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Yesterday, 03:36 PM

hillwalker replied to a thread Can I suggest an addition to the "Please read before posting" sticky? in Short Story Sharing

At last - something the mods should have done eons ago. H

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Yesterday, 03:35 PM

hillwalker replied to a thread Blue Eyes By Candlelight. in Short Story Sharing

Decent enough post - but it reads like a cross between a journal entry and a love letter to your date. Not sure what the rest of us are meant to get...

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Yesterday, 10:55 AM

hillwalker replied to a thread Untitled Composition 27 in Short Story Sharing

It gets better as it unravels. I like the laid-back, cut to the bare bones style. It suits the subject matter and you do it so well. Pt 2 when...

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Yesterday, 10:49 AM

hillwalker replied to a thread Playwriting in Personal Poetry

Good see you're doing it at last. H

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Yesterday, 10:47 AM

hillwalker replied to a thread The Dragon in Short Story Sharing

Not bad for a drunken scribble - though it looks rather too polished (despite the typos) for true stream of consciousness writing. The plot is...

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Yesterday, 10:36 AM

hillwalker replied to a thread Summer Of Love. in Short Story Sharing

This really captured the time - as well as the gawky feelings of adolescent love without being cheesy. There was obviously a huge neon sign half...

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Yesterday, 08:33 AM

hillwalker posted a visitor message on Jerrybaldy's profile

Hehe - there's also the other side of the coin. How many 'drive-by' writers never came back after their first post because they didn't appreciate a...

Yesterday, 04:37 AM

Delta40 replied to a thread true best in Personal Poetry

...and yet you manage to capture the absolute shallowness of your skill beautifully here. Congratulations - this is your true best!

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Yesterday, 03:55 AM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread walking with dog and Biggus. in Personal Poetry

fine with me symphony :)

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05-20-2013, 07:24 PM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread Summer Of Love. in Short Story Sharing

That's more like it.

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05-20-2013, 07:02 PM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread Fate Was A Daughter. in Personal Poetry

Anybody who references them self as their their own signature........

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05-20-2013, 06:52 PM

Jerrybaldy posted a visitor message on hillwalker's profile

You ever wondered knobbly knees, how many people are still here because of your input? litnet should pay you frankly. You commented on my first post...

05-20-2013, 06:25 PM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread walking with dog and Biggus. in Personal Poetry

No idea what you mean :)

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05-20-2013, 06:23 PM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread Playwriting in Personal Poetry

Lush. It's lush. I love it.

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05-20-2013, 06:20 PM