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Today, 05:12 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread This velvet glove in Personal Poetry

This is better than your last submission. It's probably more taste than anything else as this is not my kind of poetry Jett but it's definitely...

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Today, 08:47 AM

Delta40 replied to a thread Regret in Personal Poetry

and yore rimes we must endure...

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Today, 07:18 AM

Delta40 replied to a thread Regret in Personal Poetry

get rid of 'the' L4 S2, 'been' L2 S4

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Today, 05:02 AM

Delta40 replied to a thread Paris and rain and a candlelight dinner in Personal Poetry

mwah!

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Yesterday, 06:35 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread true best in Personal Poetry

My pleasure.

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Yesterday, 06:33 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread Devil's Bride. in Personal Poetry

Some of your sentence structures have been dominated by rhyme as they are forced. An example of this is: As he stopped and his eyes on me cast....

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Yesterday, 06:22 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread Paris and rain and a candlelight dinner in Personal Poetry

I loved S3 Dieter. Although the use of two 'outs' so closely together makes me think the expression could be written more smoothly.

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Yesterday, 06:00 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread Playwriting in Personal Poetry

Thank you everyone.

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Yesterday, 04:37 AM

Delta40 replied to a thread true best in Personal Poetry

...and yet you manage to capture the absolute shallowness of your skill beautifully here. Congratulations - this is your true best!

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05-20-2013, 06:20 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread walking with dog and Biggus. in Personal Poetry

scary blue. Says it all...

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05-20-2013, 05:40 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread A story by a 10 year old - Together Through Weakness in General Writing

Does that make Aunty an epicurist?

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05-20-2013, 05:09 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread Children obesity, A concern for parents by Chera McCabe in General Chat

Emil I hope you said 'Good oh' to them as they thundered past...

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05-20-2013, 05:08 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread Summer Of Love. in Short Story Sharing

That was a good read. You captured the time very well. Her death seemed to leap right off the page though probably because there was no last...

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05-20-2013, 04:58 PM

Delta40 started a thread Playwriting in Personal Poetry

Let's take the road to the land of vineyards. Now sleepy in the autumn, all bare by the river, the last of the leaves have fallen at our feet....

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05-20-2013, 04:40 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread A 'Cute' Poem in Personal Poetry

Crochet Hawk, knit Hawk, darn Hawk...

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05-20-2013, 04:38 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread Fate Was A Daughter. in Personal Poetry

This sounds alot like a serious version of Bill Bailey's Love Song.

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05-20-2013, 04:36 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread Misery loves company in General Chat

I don't know. Sometimes I can start off feeling miserable but find being in the company of happy people pulls me out of the place I'm in. Good...

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05-19-2013, 11:22 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread I wish I could cast this mantle away in Personal Poetry

Too many 'mantles' for me.

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05-19-2013, 11:20 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread One, Two & Three in Personal Poetry

Oh. Is today your day off?

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05-19-2013, 06:28 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread Children obesity, A concern for parents by Chera McCabe in General Chat

That's because the food industry wants to transform the mythical beautiful people into fat people then we can finally have equality!!!!!

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05-19-2013, 06:20 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread A story by a 10 year old - Together Through Weakness in General Writing

So ten year old Brian who drinks decaf saved 16 year old Melvin who was suicidal? That's amazing. What is also amazing is that ten year old Brian...

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05-18-2013, 09:24 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread One, Two & Three in Personal Poetry

Mmm. My sense of humour is richer than yours... :-)

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05-18-2013, 07:53 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread One, Two & Three in Personal Poetry

On earnings only. I'm poverty stricken in every other way I assure you...

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05-18-2013, 07:49 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread Impression in Personal Poetry

you just skipped through it all Bar? Reads like the kernels were reduced to shapelessness not the iotas but either works for me.

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05-18-2013, 12:04 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread One, Two & Three in Personal Poetry

Bar! So lovely to hear from you again. I hope to read an expression of your long absence shortly...

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05-18-2013, 08:23 AM

Delta40 replied to a thread One, Two & Three in Personal Poetry

Thanks Hawk. All written on the spur of the moment I'm afraid. I agree about No. 2 but it's staying the way it came out.

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05-17-2013, 06:26 PM

Delta40 started a thread One, Two & Three in Personal Poetry

My jesters bag rises in colour and the bells that tinkle when I cycle, drown all opinion. Pity I move so fast past the feelings of others...

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05-17-2013, 05:41 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread The Ultimate Contest in Personal Poetry

It is and then followed on by the show 1001 ways to die where a woman who liked to be vomited on during sex sought out these winners of hot dog comps...

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05-17-2013, 06:20 AM

Delta40 replied to a thread Blood in the snow in Personal Poetry

Everything above and below Jerry.

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05-16-2013, 05:35 PM

Delta40 replied to a thread judgemental in Personal Poetry

Nobody is telling Cacian those things but you post your poetry here so expect feedback on why it might not work. Anyway, Cacian would never write...

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