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Today,
10:45 AM
Delta40
replied to a thread
Indigo Man.
in
Personal Poetry
Ballads are an acquired taste - like stilton - or foot odour. I can't make up my mind. What I will do Jett is cheer you from the very far side...
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Today,
10:00 AM
Delta40
replied to a thread
do you offend easily?
in
General Chat
OMFG! I can't believe you even asked me that!
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3 replies | 82 view(s)
Yesterday,
08:02 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
Poverty Hindsight
in
Personal Poetry
yes you did Jerry but its a bit tarnished now...x
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5 replies | 201 view(s)
Yesterday,
06:20 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
A Short History of Postmodernism - Perspective of a Female Victim
in
Short Story Sharing
I'm not sure why you put so many brackets in the narrative. They're so distracting/confusing and impact strongly on the flow of the story. Why not...
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2 replies | 116 view(s)
05-22-2013,
11:58 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
Poverty Hindsight
in
Personal Poetry
Never fear. The pharmaceutical industry will try to convince my inspired creativity isn't the real me writing. Why, without them I might be a...
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5 replies | 201 view(s)
05-22-2013,
11:45 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
The Block of Teenage (a.k.a. what the f***ing h*ll)
in
General Writing
Yeah those massive paragrahs, no line breaks with dialogue stiched inbetween makes for a hard slog for the reader. It's like dishing out slop to...
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10 replies | 318 view(s)
05-22-2013,
11:38 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
Last sex with A. in two lines
in
Personal Poetry
Well get the mop and bucket and clean that flaw....
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8 replies | 250 view(s)
05-22-2013,
11:37 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
The Dream
in
Personal Poetry
I love the potential of this piece Lykren. I was hoping to link the dawn of silence, stepping and stepping into the world in the same silent way...
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2 replies | 176 view(s)
05-22-2013,
07:36 PM
Delta40
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Poverty Hindsight
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Personal Poetry
As the musky scent of incense burns away, I wander from room to icy room filled with a fragrant sense that riches must be found under our...
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5 replies | 201 view(s)
05-22-2013,
05:12 PM
Delta40
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This velvet glove
in
Personal Poetry
This is better than your last submission. It's probably more taste than anything else as this is not my kind of poetry Jett but it's definitely...
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5 replies | 184 view(s)
05-22-2013,
08:47 AM
Delta40
replied to a thread
Regret
in
Personal Poetry
and yore rimes we must endure...
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7 replies | 255 view(s)
05-22-2013,
07:18 AM
Delta40
replied to a thread
Regret
in
Personal Poetry
get rid of 'the' L4 S2, 'been' L2 S4
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7 replies | 255 view(s)
05-22-2013,
05:02 AM
Delta40
replied to a thread
Paris and rain and a candlelight dinner
in
Personal Poetry
mwah!
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10 replies | 319 view(s)
05-21-2013,
06:35 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
true best
in
Personal Poetry
My pleasure.
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4 replies | 211 view(s)
05-21-2013,
06:33 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
Devil's Bride.
in
Personal Poetry
Some of your sentence structures have been dominated by rhyme as they are forced. An example of this is: As he stopped and his eyes on me cast....
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4 replies | 194 view(s)
05-21-2013,
06:22 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
Paris and rain and a candlelight dinner
in
Personal Poetry
I loved S3 Dieter. Although the use of two 'outs' so closely together makes me think the expression could be written more smoothly.
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10 replies | 319 view(s)
05-21-2013,
06:00 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
Playwriting
in
Personal Poetry
Thank you everyone.
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7 replies | 234 view(s)
05-21-2013,
04:37 AM
Delta40
replied to a thread
true best
in
Personal Poetry
...and yet you manage to capture the absolute shallowness of your skill beautifully here. Congratulations - this is your true best!
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4 replies | 211 view(s)
05-20-2013,
06:20 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
walking with dog and Biggus.
in
Personal Poetry
scary blue. Says it all...
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6 replies | 268 view(s)
05-20-2013,
05:40 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
A story by a 10 year old - Together Through Weakness
in
General Writing
Does that make Aunty an epicurist?
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17 replies | 749 view(s)
05-20-2013,
05:09 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
Children obesity, A concern for parents by Chera McCabe
in
General Chat
Emil I hope you said 'Good oh' to them as they thundered past...
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47 replies | 1598 view(s)
05-20-2013,
05:08 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
Summer Of Love.
in
Short Story Sharing
That was a good read. You captured the time very well. Her death seemed to leap right off the page though probably because there was no last...
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10 replies | 325 view(s)
05-20-2013,
04:58 PM
Delta40
started a thread
Playwriting
in
Personal Poetry
Let's take the road to the land of vineyards. Now sleepy in the autumn, all bare by the river, the last of the leaves have fallen at our feet....
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7 replies | 234 view(s)
05-20-2013,
04:40 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
A 'Cute' Poem
in
Personal Poetry
Crochet Hawk, knit Hawk, darn Hawk...
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7 replies | 286 view(s)
05-20-2013,
04:38 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
Fate Was A Daughter.
in
Personal Poetry
This sounds alot like a serious version of Bill Bailey's Love Song.
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7 replies | 277 view(s)
05-20-2013,
04:36 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
Misery loves company
in
General Chat
I don't know. Sometimes I can start off feeling miserable but find being in the company of happy people pulls me out of the place I'm in. Good...
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11 replies | 287 view(s)
05-19-2013,
11:22 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
I wish I could cast this mantle away
in
Personal Poetry
Too many 'mantles' for me.
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7 replies | 289 view(s)
05-19-2013,
11:20 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
One, Two & Three
in
Personal Poetry
Oh. Is today your day off?
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10 replies | 348 view(s)
05-19-2013,
06:28 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
Children obesity, A concern for parents by Chera McCabe
in
General Chat
That's because the food industry wants to transform the mythical beautiful people into fat people then we can finally have equality!!!!!
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47 replies | 1598 view(s)
05-19-2013,
06:20 PM
Delta40
replied to a thread
A story by a 10 year old - Together Through Weakness
in
General Writing
So ten year old Brian who drinks decaf saved 16 year old Melvin who was suicidal? That's amazing. What is also amazing is that ten year old Brian...
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17 replies | 749 view(s)
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