I think I already mentioned once or twice that your verse shows the elegance of simplicity-- not that it is complacent or banal, but that it doesn't...
Decent enough post - but it reads like a cross between a journal entry and a love letter to your date. Not sure what the rest of us are meant to get...
Still a student, interdisciplinary; both the arts and sciences; Physics, Psychology/Neurology, Philosophy, English, Creative-Writing; basically I want to be Aristotle when I grow up. Perhaps one day I'll stop learning long enough to do something.
Location:
Chicago, IL, USA
Interests:
Poetry, English literature and criticism, microbiology, chess, electric blues and flamenco guitar
Occupation:
Student, Part-time educator, Freelance Writer
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"My Soul, do not seek eternal life, but to exhaust the realm of possibility." -Pindar