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Is the banter a studded leather one and do you use it across the back of their legs?

I get offended when people support under the table employment but complain about boat people taking our jobs.

Better yet: Amy: Hey Volya, long time no see! Volya: Yeah Amy, you're looking good! Amy: Yeah I know but man what happened to you? Your face...

lol. The past iron-clad virginal bleeding ones

cockatoo crap?

The post ironic pre menstrual ones?

There is a definite scent

Chapter 6: Mr. Demise nodded stupidly. He mumbled something unintelligible and allowed himself to be led him to the door." Desmond found a cab,...

You guys really brighten my Sunday morning!

I'm reading plays written by women in the 19th century.

Thanks Hill. Correct as always and edited accordingly.

If you're aiming for strict meter here maybe 'never admit' works better for the closing line. I like your explanation btw. H

It gets a bit prosey - verses 2 and 4 in particular. Not sure you're you're trying to take us with this, Jett. H

I can't pretend to understand it. But I'm guessing you are not happy and a man has done you wrong. It does read really well and the added reference...

Cakes or Turds? H

Ever hear of ghosts, Volya?? This is up to your usual standards as far as the quality of writing is concerned - but the plot reads like...

lol. Does the same principle apply to And war may last a thousand years and never once be ours? Nice to see you posting here Steve.

Check the title Volya.

Did love ever last a thousand years?

Haha. It's from some graffiti that showed a couple of cubes and said underneath "Balls to Picasso" :)

The closing two lines puts it in the realms of an angsty teenager within a middle aged person.

lol. Isn't that when you get a rubik's cube stuck on your goolies?

Nice twist. I got sidetracked at the beginning when you introduce Petro and then go into a whole back history about you, Lenny and Cecil. Perhaps...

I think this poem should begin at S3. It starts to resonate at that point.

Powerful truth in everyday living Jerry.

You are like a builder baking cakes.

I stopped at S2. Would maybe work as a song.It worked for Roxy music

Enjoyed it too. Particularly like S2. You are suddenly prolific and that is welcome.