Mojtaba-Iraqi
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Thank you!

Indeed I am

Unfortunately I'm not qualified to comment on the accuracy of this text - I have no interest in religion.

As for your writing style - it is dreadfully archaic. For example, no one uses words like 'thy' in this day and age even in poetry. I'm assuming you were trying to copy the style of the Old Testament or some similar ancient tome in order to make your writing appear more authentic.

But there is also a fundamental problem with the way you write English - what you have sent me makes no sense whatsoever. It sounds quite extravagant but it's actually completely incomprehensible.

It begs the question why you have chosen to produce such complex, well-researched (presumably?) material in a langiage with which you have only very limited skills. No one who speaks or reads English as their mother tongue will waste their time sifting through this nonsense in search of a shred of meaning. I'm afraid you are wasting your talents.

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Salam ,
Mar7aba feek . Hope you like it in online litnet.