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Today, 02:53 AM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread Blood in the snow in Personal Poetry

Thank you Silas and Bar for your very kind comments.

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Yesterday, 11:09 AM

Jack of Hearts replied to a thread Godslayer's Final Kill in Short Story Sharing

Nitpicks notwithstanding, it must be said that the story was interesting and contains some really original ideas. But more than that, having read...

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Yesterday, 03:55 AM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread walking with dog and Biggus. in Personal Poetry

fine with me symphony :)

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05-20-2013, 08:37 PM

Jack of Hearts started a thread Untitled Composition 27 in Short Story Sharing

delete

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05-20-2013, 07:53 PM

Jack of Hearts replied to a thread walking with dog and Biggus. in Personal Poetry

lol J

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05-20-2013, 07:24 PM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread Summer Of Love. in Short Story Sharing

That's more like it.

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05-20-2013, 07:02 PM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread Fate Was A Daughter. in Personal Poetry

Anybody who references them self as their their own signature........

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05-20-2013, 06:52 PM

Jerrybaldy posted a visitor message on hillwalker's profile

You ever wondered knobbly knees, how many people are still here because of your input? litnet should pay you frankly. You commented on my first post...

05-20-2013, 06:25 PM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread walking with dog and Biggus. in Personal Poetry

No idea what you mean :)

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05-20-2013, 06:23 PM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread Playwriting in Personal Poetry

Lush. It's lush. I love it.

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05-20-2013, 06:13 PM

Jerrybaldy started a thread walking with dog and Biggus. in Personal Poetry

GAY John loves Jack Jean loves Jane no drop of blood is shed. People love their given God then half the world is dead. To all the girls I...

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05-20-2013, 04:00 PM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread Fate Was A Daughter. in Personal Poetry

Come again? What century is this? Have I lost my pills again?

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05-20-2013, 03:55 PM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread A 'Cute' Poem in Personal Poetry

Darn that Hawk. I didn't notice until he pointed it out but he is right. That closing line near contradicts the end of the first stanza. That aside...

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05-19-2013, 03:41 PM

Jack of Hearts replied to a thread I wish I could cast this mantle away in Personal Poetry

An unfortunate fact of life is that Mr. Folini is not a troll and posts with in a post-scholastic fashion. However, perhaps even more discouraging,...

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05-19-2013, 02:55 PM

jajdude replied to a thread Poems you make up on the spot in Poetry Games & Contests

Snowstorm in May, oh, cruel, foul weather, When will you get your act together? I've been struggling too long, here comes another day, And all you...

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05-19-2013, 02:25 PM

jajdude replied to a thread Minimalist Poetry Contest in Poetry Games & Contests

A man at sea indifferent to the waves and winds Soon finds himself washed away

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05-19-2013, 01:52 PM

jajdude replied to a thread What (American) English sounds like to non-English speaking people in General Chat

You can recognize your own accent when you've been away long enough. Everybody has an accent. Some are easier for more people to understand. Some are...

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05-18-2013, 09:46 PM

Jack of Hearts replied to a thread DocHeart's poetry corner in Personal Poetry

Hey fogey, this thread contains some of the best poetry ever put on this forum.

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05-18-2013, 07:43 PM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread Impression in Personal Poetry

Welcome back. A brief impression. Can imagine how the words went around in your mind. Hope all is well in the East.

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05-18-2013, 07:39 PM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread One, Two & Three in Personal Poetry

All of them :) BTW I just read on another thread that you are middle class. I would have swore you were with us working lot ..

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05-18-2013, 07:38 PM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread Blood in the snow in Personal Poetry

Thanks all ye faithful. Sorry you weren't keen Buh. I understand why.

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05-18-2013, 07:33 PM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread DocHeart's poetry corner in Personal Poetry

Good luck with the novel. Hope it makes you as rich as this poem.

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05-18-2013, 07:30 PM

Jerrybaldy replied to a thread The Ultimate Contest in Personal Poetry

Yours are the poems I always find more within on rereading.

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05-16-2013, 07:20 PM

Jerrybaldy started a thread Blood in the snow in Personal Poetry

There’s blood in the snow, in the yard by the sink hole, where I should never go. By the sink hole where, in summer, the golden fruit would...

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05-13-2013, 06:21 PM

Jack of Hearts replied to a thread Our Echo / Kill Everybody in Personal Poetry

Eh, this could be a taste thing, but this reader isn't buying it, Grit. These preachy poems aren't hitting any emotional resonance here. The scorn...

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05-12-2013, 07:29 PM

Jack of Hearts replied to a thread Hog Day Afternoon in General Writing

This was funny, Aunty. Also easy and pleasant to read. J

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05-10-2013, 07:44 PM

Jack of Hearts replied to a thread Man in a Box in Short Story Sharing

That was a good-*** movie dawg. J

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05-10-2013, 01:01 PM

Jack of Hearts replied to a thread Well here is one of mine. in Personal Poetry

It ain't bad, T. But it is long. Is that first stanza helping your poem or just dragging it out? The whole thing could do with a thinning, though. ...

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