Dear friend...if the dreaded "H" word is Hillwalker then he is more then welcomed to help me straighten my work out....you give very good advice. Or perhaps the "H" word is HELP....which would also be applicable as that is what you do.....
What else could it be?
It went well.
First day of college hooray.
Ok. I was fully aware of the “risk”. I knew in advance that my text Naïve II wouldn’t be meeting the most recent dogmas of modern poetry.
In another fine anglo forum they said “completely outdated yet it’s a good lyrical”. And they found every stance perfectly readable I mean no “garbling” problem .
One thing is sure: each one has the right to have his/her own ideas based on his/her research, but no one has the right to say “behold the final rules of modern poetry”…!
Last but not the least I made the mistake of posting it on purpose.
As in fighting sports sparring: no mistakes – no wisdom…
And now ladies & gentlemans back to the ring…! ;-)
soooo good to see you posting again!
Hey Hill! How are you doing. Would love to hear your comments about my other poem that I had posted earlier. It is called Venus--Shining Bright. Thanks in advance.
It's really nice seeing you around again. I miss your constructive feedbacks.
message sent you mis place word 'offend is suppose to mean defend'.
Nice to see you back hill
The Skinny Lad
Freed by your indulgence
an organized mess