Hayseed Huck
Registered User

hey i do get what you mean. I just have a habit of doing any wrighting in a bad mood. Self pity is a part of grief.

Hey I am just saying thanks again. Gramar is not my strong point.

You're a bit harsher than what they are used to around here, but maybe it will be good for them.

Huck, the sense of place and time was superb. Even the unusual paragraphs and dialogue were great. Congragulations