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    06-07-2013, 01:22 AM
    Haunted replied to a thread Reincarnation in Personal Poetry
    See what I found, I almost missed this little star! Love 1st and 2nd stanzas. Fourth is brilliant, with "the commuter on the train" *gulp* I...
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    06-04-2013, 02:56 AM
    Haunted replied to a thread A Short Collection of Trashy Poems in Personal Poetry
    A belated thank you to all kittypaws, so sweet of you, loved the cat comment. Hawk, as always, thanks for helping me improve, I've made some...
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    06-04-2013, 02:36 AM
    Haunted replied to a thread Mad Dog in Personal Poetry
    There's a lot packed in here. The parallel to Richard III is particularly striking. Sad sad sad ending as we now know, and ironic. The mad dog and...
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    06-03-2013, 07:51 PM
    Haunted replied to a thread What Is It? in Personal Poetry
    Your words and line flow mimicked the airiness of the whole thing so well!
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    06-03-2013, 07:46 PM
    Haunted replied to a thread A song of beyond in Personal Poetry
    I adore the first song, although I have the same reaction as Hawk. Best to avoid ambiguous words if it's not your intended meaning. You had me...
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    06-03-2013, 07:33 PM
    Haunted replied to a thread Ftfagos in Personal Poetry
    are they in uniforms?
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    06-03-2013, 07:29 PM
    Haunted replied to a thread The Hum Drum Beat in Personal Poetry
    Nothing monotonous about this poem, despite the subject matter. Excellent writing.
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    05-29-2013, 01:33 AM
    Haunted replied to a thread A Short Collection of Trashy Poems in Personal Poetry
    I wonder how you are how's the weather there have you made new friends is the food agreeable do you enjoy the sparrows the bats and the...
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    05-28-2013, 11:12 AM
    Haunted replied to a thread Moody Tuesday in Personal Poetry
    I didn't get it at first, "interdigital webbing" threw me off. These days when I see the word "web" I think of the Internet. On second read...
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    05-28-2013, 10:59 AM
    Haunted replied to a thread Paris and rain and a candlelight dinner in Personal Poetry
    Glad you reposted, I can fully appreciate it. I enjoyed how you turned the idea of Paris is for lovers on its head.
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    05-28-2013, 04:18 AM
    Haunted replied to a thread cubic balls. in Personal Poetry
    "cubic balls" is a paradox. You just elevated it to the level of art ;)
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    05-28-2013, 04:10 AM
    Haunted replied to a thread Depression To Die For. in Personal Poetry
    Lots of good stuff in here but also lots of words. Depression is not the problem, overwriting is. Basically your piece starts 4th line in. You should...
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    05-28-2013, 03:16 AM
    Haunted replied to a thread Poetry from my heart in Personal Poetry
    Really like the way you end it but no idea who's talking to who. Who's the "mother", is it the mother of the mother of the kids... You might want to...
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    05-25-2013, 01:33 PM
    Haunted replied to a thread Ode to Saturday Morning in Personal Poetry
    It's a good one Steven. The last line is a killer.
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    05-25-2013, 01:22 PM
    Haunted replied to a thread Angel Eyes, in Personal Poetry
    I like it, and how you frame the "angel eyes" lines is really nice. But after a while it's just laden with commonalities, descending into romance...
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    05-24-2013, 02:56 AM
    Haunted replied to a thread News in Personal Poetry
    Watching the news coverage for the second day in the comfort of my own home, yeah the bleeding out was a world away and the terror and everything...
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