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    Today, 03:04 PM
    Hawkman replied to a thread Would You?? in Forum Games
    God no. When the lights go out, I just want to rest and enjoy the quiet. Oblivion... Something to look forward to. However, I might have my mortal...
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    Today, 02:52 PM
    Hawkman replied to a thread Pam in Forum Games
    Pam does unspeakable things to ducks.
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    05-21-2017, 06:53 PM
    Ayahuasca Express The Hut on the Yapacani “You have a feeling of achievement when you discover a new plant, even a plant that has no use.”...
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    05-20-2017, 05:15 PM
    Hawkman replied to a thread Would You?? in Forum Games
    I'll drink it until it's un-drinkable, which, generally, does not correlate with expiry dates on labels. When exposed to a man-bun, would you...
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    05-20-2017, 05:12 PM
    Hawkman replied to a thread Pam in Forum Games
    Pam has an unhealthy interest in other people's egg eating habits.
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    05-19-2017, 08:07 PM
    Buh4Bee replied to a thread Today in Personal Poetry
    Very accurate description of the city- why I left. Evocative describes the piece perfectly.
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    05-19-2017, 02:31 PM
    Hawkman replied to a thread How many ...? in Forum Games
    If not all of them, then very nearly all of them, although the last page had been ripped out of Peril at End House, which was annoying. How many...
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    05-19-2017, 02:26 PM
    Hawkman replied to a thread Pam in Forum Games
    Pam wears other people's shoes, on the right feet, but she always picks shoes that have been worn by people with galloping foot rot. Consequently Pam...
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    05-18-2017, 08:10 PM
    Tales of Sin Cargo-and the author's notes Welcome to another slice of the world’s most unpublishable novel, Undercover of Darkness, the Tales of...
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    05-18-2017, 08:30 AM
    You were Ralph and Roger and Jack, full of purpose when we landed upon our island together. You built shelters and fires, found food , hunted...
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    05-16-2017, 04:25 PM
    Hawkman replied to a thread Pam in Forum Games
    Just as the spectacled bear is a spectacular bear! Pam has spectacular spectacles made out of spectacular spectacled bears
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    05-14-2017, 05:39 PM
    Hawkman replied to a thread Would You?? in Forum Games
    Only if they were on a diet. Would you rule wisely?
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    05-14-2017, 01:42 PM
    Steven Hunley replied to a thread Mettle in Short Story Sharing
    I just have to say right now, this genre isn't my cup of tea. Futuristic is almost like Fantasy, you make up the rules, all the rules. The foreign...
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    05-13-2017, 03:52 AM
    Hawkman replied to a thread Blank 3 in Personal Poetry
    Hi Dieter, and thanks for stopping by. Glad you found so much to enjoy in this. I was pretty angry when I wrote it. It doesn't take much these days....
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    05-09-2017, 02:16 PM
    Hawkman replied to a thread Blank 3 in Personal Poetry
    Hello, JB, thanks for stopping by. How's the seaside? I endure, and though everything is unutterably awful, for the moment, the awfulness is not as...
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    05-09-2017, 02:12 PM
    Hawkman replied to a thread Savvy in Personal Poetry
    Glad I got to see this before you delete it! Food for though, as always.. Live and be well - H
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    05-08-2017, 02:57 PM
    Hawkman replied to a thread December 1999 in Personal Poetry
    On the contrary, the last 8 lines are perfect. It's the rest that needs to go. What comes before is just a jumble of expressions and statements....
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    05-08-2017, 06:40 AM
    Dear Peter I am very grudgingly beginning to think that Trump's brashness is being curtailed by some realistic setbacks that you previously...
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    05-07-2017, 06:23 AM
    Hawkman replied to a thread Blank 3 in Personal Poetry
    Hi Magnocrat: I'm glad you liked the live and doves. As for your questions, the point is, really; what do you think they are? It is one of the...
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    05-07-2017, 01:57 AM
    Hawkman replied to a thread Blank 3 in Personal Poetry
    Dreamwoven: thank you for reading, for enjoying and for commenting. Danik 2016: the world we live in generates quite a lot of the first, a will to...
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    05-06-2017, 09:59 PM
    Thank you for your kind words, Mister Hunley. Any feedback is good – I like it – but something positive, and especially from you? Dope! But isn't...
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    05-06-2017, 01:57 AM
    Hawkman started a thread Blank 3 in Personal Poetry
    I cannot pay the bill The bitter bill for all the children killed. I will not cry Nor shed my tears for those the horsemen Gather to their sides....
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    05-05-2017, 07:34 PM
    Great story, well written, characterized, and plotted.
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    05-05-2017, 12:05 PM
    One problem with this is the tags. Many are unneeded. The dialogue is written but not easy flowing. I suspect English is not your first language....
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    05-04-2017, 09:50 PM
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    Hey to you! I hope you are enjoying your time, whatever it is you are doing. I'm fine, same old, same old. Nothing really changes here, except the...
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    05-04-2017, 03:14 AM
    I ALWAYS read the comments. The problem is, even with hundreds of reads, there's no comments. I have to tell you about another site called...
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    05-02-2017, 04:28 PM
    Tease from Two Horses For A King- A servant appeared carrying a chased silver tray heaped high with delicacies, and after finding suitable...
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    05-01-2017, 03:31 PM
    Manichaean, Good to hear from you. It was like going on a vacation (my 1st time in Manhattan) and stumbling on a crime scene. I notice in the ads...
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    05-01-2017, 12:05 AM
    THE Death's Head Moth Robert Henry Forester sat at his antique oak desk writing and drinking. Both were what he did best. He’d always like...
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    Thanks very much, you're too kind I'm glad you thought it was funny, not everyone will think so, I suspect I mean, did your son (27) laugh, or did he look at you as if part of you was missing? I had to go and tweak it as there were two tiny mistakes in it, but you probably won't notice any significant change. This is the first short I've written in months and I was feeling the urge. I just sat down this morning and started typing. This is what came out. I'm very flattered that you rate it so highly. Thanks very much for the note. Chin, chin - H
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