TheInsomniac
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That's nice to hear TheInsomniac, but I'm from Manchester.

You look incredibley familiar for some reason...

Hello there
I don't believe we've spoken before.
Nice page. Curious avatar. Excellent signature (well, the first half )
LadyW.

Okay. I have just added you to my email contacts. Sorry for any delays in re messageing you. School is all I can think of.

thanks nick. i try to become familiar with writing poetry though it is not that easy. i prefer writing prose, i find it more easy.

pretty much on the same motif as far as sentiments are concerned. i love the way you expose the sentiments of the character. even when he simply states how he feels, it is full of endurance. your character gained my respect, i saw dignity in what i read. although someone could feel pity about someone having such bad experiences, i could not feel that. it is a person that simply doesn't deserve it.
to be honest i think i might like the first story more, though i cannot tell for sure. this one has more action, it guides the reader to imagine a certain scene without putting a lot of his own imagination himself, but still, i did not feel opressed, i felt like my imagination was free to think of anything i wanted. i don't know if you get what i'm saying, but what is important, is that the way you write is really touching and i strongly believe it can have an effect on others. i was thinking of your previous story yesterday for a great deal. and i don't know with how many others you have shared them, but i am sure everyone loves the way you write. and as a reader, i am not one of the easily-satisfied. and usually i do a hard critique on others because i believe in the ability of constant improvement. but really, i don't have anything to say. i don't know if there are any mistakes concernind the form of the text or anything like this, but it would take me a lot of time to trace them, for the essence of your writing has captured me...

hey, I got to go to school. I just wanted to know what your email is so I can send you a story. could u help

the only things i have are in my blog. i used to write a novel, but since i am not a tech freak and not that clever, i had not saved it properly on the pcs(yes, i thought i had saved it in my 2 pcs) and after a format...it was vanished into thin air! after that i did not know if it was worth it to write ie all over again- and writing in english is a little difficult when it is not your mother-tongue you know. anyways, if you want you can check my few entries. thanks!

i really have zero creatuvity right now. I can't think of something that i could write well. I'm jjust doing these storys to see what i can do. but i will make a long story in a bit