Trystan
Registered User

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Hey brother, I don't know if you remember me or not. I used to post quite frequently... Story is that I got arrested in Feb 2009 and was in jail until a few months ago. I just started writing again, and my style has changed dramatically. I always appreciated your feedback back when I used to post, and would really appreciate it if you could review my first poem (prose) since coming back. It's on the forum, and it's called "Putti". A short explanation, in the 16th century, in the age of Baroque art, childlike angels, usually male, were called "putto". "putti" is simply the plural. The prose is about growing up and losing your innocence. Again, I would really appreciate if you would comment. I need to know if I lost my touch, and if I should go back to my old writing style or not. Thanks again, bro.

hello? it's like a friggin' ghost town....Echo..echo..eco..o

hey, if you ever get on, it would be nice to talk to ya!!