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Sadly Mistaken

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If I look like I care,
You are sadly mistaken,
The Smile you been seeing,
Is the smile I've been faking,
The heart that was beating,
Is now reduced to breaking....

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  1. Neo_Sephiroth's Avatar
    Dang...Strong emotions full of anger in this one but it makes a nice little poem.
  2. Maximilianus's Avatar
    How sharply poignant
  3. mtpspur's Avatar
    Disagree on the anger -- I thought sadness and self-awareness. Strongly recommend reading thru the Psalms for peace of mind.
  4. stephofthenight's Avatar
    thank you mtpspur. I will try it
  5. Maximilianus's Avatar
    With all due respect for mtpspur's beliefs, who seems a really nice person, I have never encountered a single sense of relief in holy writings of any kind. However that's just me. Maybe, for me, what's been put to words is not enough compared to what's been put to facts.
  6. stephofthenight's Avatar
    Well maxi, I hope you find comfort in it one day. I personaly believe on the lines of mtpspur
  7. Maximilianus's Avatar
    Maybe one day, who knows. For now I get my comfort on slightly different shores, or dreaming of them