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O, Brother! My Brother!

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O, Brother! My Brother!

O, Brother! My Brother!
How thou has changed into another!

With little time, a change in feature
How thou has become a creature!

O, my grief! My sorrow!
Will I see thee on the morrow?

Regret? Regret?
Should I have left?

No! I cannot!
It could not be stop!

Thou hath made thy choice!
Thou has a voice!

Though I am grieved and pained
I will not live my life in vain

I will love thee forever
O, Brother. My Brother.

~Andy V. Khamsa
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  1. Dark Muse's Avatar
    I really liked this, I loved the structure of it, I have always had a certain soft spot for poems written in couplets.
  2. JuniperWoolf's Avatar
    I like the structure too. I only ever enjoy a poem it it's fun to read out loud, and this one is.
  3. Neo_Sephiroth's Avatar
    Thank you, kindly! Once in a blue moon...
  4. stephofthenight's Avatar
    Another piece of brillance!!!
  5. Neo_Sephiroth's Avatar
    I just can't look at that avatar of yours and NOT smile. She is too cute! Ugh!