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Just Because You...

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Just because you apologize,
Doesn't mean you win
Just becuase you want to change.
Doesn't mean you can

Just because you once smiled,
Doesn't mean you should
Just becuase you wish,
Doesn't mean you would

Just because you once laughed,
Doesn't mean you will
Just becuase you once loved,
Doesn't mean you still...

Updated 12-04-2009 at 06:13 PM by stephofthenight



  1. The Comedian's Avatar
    I love the rhythm, pacing, and message of this poem. The first two lines -- Just because you apologize/Doesn't mean you win -- are especially potent.
  2. Neo_Sephiroth's Avatar
    Oh..My...Goodness! I love it! Very good. Excellent. Beginning to mature more so than ever.
  3. stephofthenight's Avatar
    Thanks Neo Comedian thank you, they are my favorite too.
  4. mtpspur's Avatar
    Getting a good handle on things Steph. Glad to see more of you here.
  5. Maximilianus's Avatar
    What a hell of a poem Steph!!

    You can write when you want!!

    Perfect words in a perfect order!!
  6. Maximilianus's Avatar
    Okay, country princess (though I'd rather say you're a queen)

    How about "Just because you" for a title? Just a thought
  7. stephofthenight's Avatar
    mtpspur thanks, its good to be around more. missed it in the sparse moments. Maxums you flatter Glad you liked it thou.
  8. Maximilianus's Avatar
    Awww, how sweet, you just gave it the title I suggested! Now I feel flattered BTW, I meant what I said. It's a great poem. I'm even learning it by heart because I like it so much
  9. stephofthenight's Avatar
    Lol thanks max Its rythmatic so it should be pretty easy to memorize.. im flattered you think highly of it. unfortunatly I understand what caused me to write the poem and that constricts a lot of the happy feelings I would normaly have towards it. But I'm glad eveyone is enjoying it.
  10. Maximilianus's Avatar
    I hope the reason that made you write it isn't causing much pain, but if it is, then I hope you soon find a way to get rid of it