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The Cold Waiting Season

- She the east; He the west -

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She was the east; he was the west.
Both walked toward a different place.

This brought to her, pain and regret.
Decided, she abandoned his sunset,
And walked east at her own pace.

With no clue and a little late,
He turned to her
Wanting to make her east his place.

But still
She was the east and he was the west.
There was no way to change
Their predestinated place.

Burning in love,
She just hoped.
Until he said, full of love,
“Walk with me to the North”
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  1. Dark Muse's Avatar
    Ooh I really liked this own. Great concept, nicely done.
  2. The Walker's Avatar
    oh, thanks Dark Muse!
  3. kevinthediltz's Avatar
    Written about a boy by any chance?
    I like it.
  4. The Walker's Avatar
    yes it is about a boy. He ignored she loved him but with the time he fell in love with her...
    well i think it is a little more complicated than that...
    Updated 06-01-2009 at 04:07 PM by The Walker
  5. BienvenuJDC's Avatar
    Very good...but I detect a typo above...
  6. The Walker's Avatar
    got it hehe, thanks!