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Sparkles and blood.

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A beautiful mind
Sweet and innocent,
Dark and sadistic.
Gleaming sparkles
Floating in blood.

Screams draw me closer
The sirens song
But no sharp rock
Can stop this ship
From the deafening call

This is the end
You have captured me now
A prisoner
Forever drowning
In sparkles and blood.


  1. *Classic*Charm*'s Avatar
    That's very vivid, Kevin, in both the visual and auditory senses. At least, it is for me. Nice work
  2. Silas Thorne's Avatar
    Richly dark and beautiful!
    Trapped me in it by the last lines:
    'A prisoner
    Forever drowning
    In sparkles and blood.'

    Watch out for this kind of woman, kevin

    And watch out for:
    'Cold eyelids that hide like a jewel
    Hard eyes that grow soft for an hour;
    The heavy white limbs, and the cruel
    Red mouth like a venomous flower;'

    That's from Swinburne, thought you might like it.
  3. a_little_wisp's Avatar
    Watch out indeed! The lady sounds wonderfully gothic - a true siren.

    Lovely, as always.
  4. IJustMadeThatUp's Avatar
    You be careful now, Kev!
  5. LostPrincess13's Avatar
    Beautiful poem!

    I must warn you though, some things are not what they seem...
  6. skib's Avatar
    Kev, were you playing with the sparkles in the slaughterhouse again?
  7. kevinthediltz's Avatar
    Silas, that passage gave me chills. Look out for those ones. The rest of you (except skibers) thank you thank you thank you. I'll be careful ya hear!

    Skib- Shutuuuuup! No one is supposed to know about that!