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haiku 4 my son

Rating: 3 votes, 5.00 average.


1....
he told me today
i will be leaving home soon
mom's heart grins and cries

2...
he was a child
looking back he grew so fast
now he's grown and gone

3...
the world awaits him
so much to offer and lose
jump right in my son
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  1. B-Mental's Avatar
    I like these littlewing, but I have to admit I thought you were a little younger.
  2. andave_ya's Avatar
    Yeah, same here. But I love the continuity of it. Very nice!!
  3. Countess's Avatar
    Awh,so sad. )-;
  4. Virgil's Avatar
    Goodness, I thought you were a lot younger. Pretty haikus.
  5. kiz_paws's Avatar
    Bittersweet. Hugs to you, my friend, for letting go, it is the only thing to do. As for age ... ummmm irrelevent?
  6. littlewing53's Avatar
    ok it's a new day...and now i feel real silly..thanks for the good thoughts you guys...didn't think it would hit me so hard...i knew it was coming...young, old...geez....all i know is for the first time in a long time i am going to be living alone and i can't wait yet i'm gonna miss the big kid...whose going to shovel all this snow!!!...did it myself yesterday...nearly killed me...ok, i am woman hear me roar...i did it all by myself!!!