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New light; Smile to your Sorrow

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New light;
Smile to your Sorrow


Let me go- let me go
to the lake of dreams,
where light is shadow
and darkness seems
to shade delight -
The growing flowers
In hidden night
Reflect the hours
In carefree ways.
Sing softly, now, then
Of glittering days,
And peace within.

I nothing am -
and glad I came -
Thy little lamb,
She knows thy name.

Fate let me go -
and now I know
that I am free,
and nought controls thee.

Sweet thought, sorrow smiling;
I'm away - I'll away be.
Few thoughts, unbeguiling,
Reach the root of a tree.

What shall I bring, returning?
If I should return to life -
I would leave behind fears and yearning
and put an end to strife.

Life and dreams are two and one,
The same, are one and two;
When dreaming life is through and done,
Life's dreams are done and through.

A gleeful bad poem was sung to me;
On the third day of traverse,
And the poet hid behind a tree,
Before I could answer worse.

Once I smiled to sorrow;
And in reply, it said,
“I am here tomorrow,”
So I slept instead.



(This one is far from finished. . . You know how Blake reworks some of his poems, I plan to rework the last stanza at least. . .)
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  1. farnoosh's Avatar
    WOW I L.O.V.E.D it!
    again I'm lost for words... Congrats my friend. Your writing is uniquely qualified for my taste in poetry hehe
  2. NikolaiI's Avatar
    Haha, I am too..
    That completely and totally, and utterly made my day, Farnoosh Thank you so much!
    Updated 10-25-2014 at 08:49 PM by NikolaiI
  3. farnoosh's Avatar
    You are most welcome

    PS. I replied to your comment yesterday while I was in a class, but as i pressed post now my Wi-Fi disconnected, I thought it got sent but... guess not :|
  4. NikolaiI's Avatar
    Ah, I understand. that's okay. By the way I posted some poems to my latest blog. . including one of my favorites, the Erlking.
  5. farnoosh's Avatar
    You are most welcome

    PS. I replied to your comment yesterday while I was in a class, but as i pressed post now my Wi-Fi disconnected, I thought it got sent but... guess not :|
  6. NikolaiI's Avatar
    Hehe, I'm guessing you didn't mean to send that message twice
  7. farnoosh's Avatar
    Sorry )) I hadn't refreshed the page so I thought it didn't send
  8. NikolaiI's Avatar
    I was reading these backwards, and... that was confusing