Read whatever you like from my work, and send me a private message. Thanks. I wrote the first version. Best Wishes, Virginia
I saw that your thread was closed down. If you'd still like a critique I'd be happy to attempt one; but a smaller section of your original post would be easier to work with.
Hi, you said you are glad to read the two versions and drop a few comments two days ago. Will you please go to the new thread in general literature and sumbit a post. I will really appreciate your opinions, I think, because you said you enjoy literature. All the Best, Virginia
deleted. I am sorry I do not really understand what your stance is. You gave different views in your second and third posts. people are either for or against word for word translation, but you were being ambiguous and trying to be neutral. I never read poetry; however I enjoy the second version quite a lot.