I did like it, there was a story in there, it stimulated my imagination, I wanted to know more. Just the last line I thought didn't fit. My effort was Time it goes so slowly, and I wasn't happy with it - manufactured sentimentality.
I'm glad you liked my poem (Our timing was good). That made my day! Thank you for the mention.
Aw. That's kind of you. Thank you and you're welcome.
Well Thankyou! You are right about remembering to compliment. I meant to compliment you after your generous and positive first post back on the "Old Members" thread. You were missed.
I think you are delightful around and about on these forums. I'm bad at remembering to compliment people, but I consistently enjoy your posts.
