I posted the next section. You make a good point about the sudden transformation from peasent to soldier. I'll work in a better training period. http://www.online-literature.com/for...524#post720524
Hey, thanks again for the thoughts. I posted the next section ... hope you like it. http://www.online-literature.com/for...d=1#post713334
I've posted the second part of my short story ... I would love to hear your feed back. http://www.online-literature.com/for...d.php?p=689013 Thank you
