OK, it's not that great so your not missing much....
i saw you had post more entries in your story "lovers through war and peace" unfortunately (ops?) i cant read it now i will as soon as i can though.
oh i didnt mean anything wrong,please dont misunderstand me. I liked it; i just had the expectation of a more dramatic final, but i think you gave it a good one. Hope i didnt offend you. I'm just a reader I cannot write a story as good as yours so you are way ahead of me...
What did you mean by "somethings missing"?
oh yeah sorry i was talking about "my story", well done. now i'll read your another ine hehehe
Which one? "my story"? If so no i didn't I did the boy half and my friend did the other part If your talking about the Lover war one, then yes i did
hi, i'm erika. i just read your story. i gotta say it is good and very touching but still something is missing for me. did you write all of it? if so girl you are a good writer