Thank you, IJustMadeThatUp amd Becca.
Aww! Good job on saving Moses =)
What a beautiful story and poem
Thank you, mhockenberry.
What a lovely story to inspire a poem.
Thank you Virgil. And thank you, Comedian. Thank you both for stopping by to read.
Lovely stuff quimssung -- the story and the poem were both a fun and moving read.
How absolutely heart warming!!! What an act of goodness and love. Thanks for the story and the poem.
Thank You for dropping by Virgil. You are an astute poetry reader, so I appreciate your comments.
I like those lines, too.
Welcome to the blogs Qimi. A disturbing poem. Feels like some impending doom. THese lines were most interesting:
I haunt myself
play a blue guitar
dawn never comes,
and the sun, it never sets
Thank You, Prince! It is NOT autobiographical. I'm not sure I could post something this personal and painful on the web. But, again, thank you for your comments, especially "images that always ring true and are never showy", well, and all of them.
This reads O.K. to me. I wrote it late last night, and I always woriry that I'll come back and find something like this to be dreck.
Thanks Prince, for being the first to read and comment on my blog!
Oh, Qimmisung! I could of course comment on the poetic excellence of this, the images that always ring true and are never showy, the way you break your lines - as credible as somone's breathing - but I am more moved (and upset) by the content of what I take to be a dream, an unpleasant, anxiety-ridden dream.
If there is anything really autobiographical in this, I hope you are able to consult your abundant resources of intelligence and optimism in the face of it.
I am blessed by your existence.