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Victory of the Heart

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Dark Muse
, 12-09-2008 at 03:59 PM (1308 Views)
Victory of the Heart

Heart beats racing like a birds wing
close my eyes and listen to it sing
dance to the music inside me
feel myself slipping away
with the fading of the day
alas finally to be free
no longer will I try to fight
freely I surrender tonight
a kiss I will give beneath the tree

Updated 12-09-2008 at 07:36 PM by Dark Muse

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  1. mtpspur's Avatar
    Sleeping or Sweeping??? Or am I overthinking it again. Plus grinning-you are one happy DM these days.
    Updated 12-09-2008 at 06:30 PM by mtpspur
  2. Dark Muse's Avatar
    How did I do that? LOL, it is suppose to be slipping
  3. mtpspur's Avatar
    Slipping!!!--now I have ANOTHER perspective--the mind continues to boggle. Plus with the words I was thinking of imagine the interpretations!!!!
  4. PabloQ's Avatar
    Easy there, kiddo, or you're going have to be Dusky Muse or Smoky Muse or Mostly I'm Dark but Sometimes I Get Happy Muse. Actually, it's fun to see the range of your creativity from dark to light. This one can still go wrong, but at the moment you've capture here it is hopeful.
    Sorry I missed the typo, your typos make for interesting interpretations.