Primal fires burn And I saw for a moment the eyes of Prometheus, they watched me in a haze of smoke and then my heart broke. They would chain you for your mortal passion we all must give in to.
Updated 08-20-2008 at 09:34 PM by Dark Muse
they watched me in a haze of smoke and then my heart broke. This is exactly how I felt when reading Prometheus Bound. You really know how to express feelings in the poetic form; I'm humbled. edit: *ehm* OMG I LOVE THE GRIM ADVENTURES OF BILLY AND MANDY!!!
Thank you very much, hehe and I am glad I am not the only one
Prometheus is sort of my heroic vision...remember that thread we were bantering back and forth on? Can you imagine to be so oppressed and suffer over and over. Very beautiful poem...If I had one criticism of your work...(forgive me if I already mentioned this) I would like to see longer poems...maybe extend this one when you are in a writing mood. I think you are a terrific writer.
Thank you very much, I made this one short becasue it was an attempt to write in the fasion of one of my favorite writers whom does write very short and fragemented poems like this one.
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