A sad truth presented in a simple language. The use of imagery is so befitting. Yes Angli, we must remember we are only migratory bird and have to go back one day. Thanks for this unique poem.
Originally Posted by Maryd. Sigh... I like this very much... Thanks, Maryd, for the kind words. But why the sigh?
Sigh... I like this very much...
Thanks, AG, for this reply. And sorry for the delay, for I just noticed it!
Thanks, Janney, for the comment. So cat is always the winner! Is this what you read from the scribbling? We have another way of deciphering this. Wish you well!
the game between cat and mouse, cat is always the winner
Well, you rather took my breath away for a moment. I thought that you were really gone saying goodbye in this dramatic way. Thank God, you are back with your refreshing and unique poems. And never say goodbye like this. Get well soon dear. AG
Thanks, AG, for the nice words. I was under the weather for a couple of days. I couldn't scribble and type! Sorry for the belated response!
Beautiful! It is very nice and a little different from your other poems. There is something soothing and gentle about this farewell. May your stream of inspiration never end!
Originally Posted by aliengirl You are very kind Angli. Thanks for sharing such lovely poems. Thanks, AG, for the kind words every day!
You are very kind Angli. Thanks for sharing such lovely poems.
Originally Posted by aliengirl Certainly not my dear! I like watermelon, good to look at and good to eat. A real treat in summer. Thanks for the offer. Thanks, AG, for gracing this thread again! No one is foolish enough to say no to refreshing watermelon in summer!
Certainly not my dear! I like watermelon, good to look at and good to eat. A real treat in summer. Thanks for the offer.
Originally Posted by aliengirl Delicate and musical! I could almost hear a guitar strumming as I read your poem. Keep up your beautiful work. Regards. Thanks, AG, for your beautiful words. Your wish is my command! I'll hang on! Wish you well
Originally Posted by aliengirl What a wonderfully naughty idea! A watermelon instead of rose. But I think before giving the present one must keep a helmet handy. Who knows what would be the result? Hi, AG, If I present you a watermelon, will you let the juicy refreshing meat go to waste? Wish you well
Originally Posted by aliengirl Very sweet poem! I like the title too. Your choice of words create an effect of hushed silence and long waiting hours. Superb! Thanks, AG, for the sweet words. Your words keep me going on! Wish you well
Delicate and musical! I could almost hear a guitar strumming as I read your poem. Keep up your beautiful work. Regards.
What a wonderfully naughty idea! A watermelon instead of rose. But I think before giving the present one must keep a helmet handy. Who knows what would be the result?
Very sweet poem! I like the title too. Your choice of words create an effect of hushed silence and long waiting hours. Superb!
You're welcome.