Prince thanks for the read!
Great ending! If sad as hell.
Pity, Haunted, because your writing is really superb. Don't ever say never; who knows, someday you might get up and just feel inspired to write something again. I surely hope so. I would enjoy reading it.
Beautiful and so artistic. I recall seeing it on Youtube and loving it. You did a great job; I posted there and told you so. I am sorry you lost all those comments. I am glad you can have it on the other site. You sure have a lot of talent, Haunted. Keep making those great vids and I will be your best audience....promise....
Thanks Janine, I'm touched by that. Actually I have stopped writing a long time ago, not likely to do it again. But so glad you enjoyed this.
Haunted, I love your video and the song goes so well with it. I love this movie, as you well know, since we have discussed it before. I need to re-watch it soon along with "Young Adam", another Ewan film I happen to own.
Fantastic poem, Haunted. I love the way the lines are short and yet flow amazingly well. It's very clever too and it just takes my breath away in the deeper meaning. I have been there and felt this same way. I can relate and you have relayed the feeling perfectly. Beautiful poem and one you should be proud of. Keep writing!
Thanks, Virgil, I really appreciated it!!!!
Daniel, thanks so much for your comment. I struggled a lot with fusing the two concepts as well as getting the line breaks right. Your read is reassuring. Qim, thanks for your kind words. It means a lot!
Outstanding! This is fascinating. The really short line lengths add much to this. Yes, the rhythm, the pacing, the going back in time.
Oh, you have created a work of singular beauty, Haunted. It is quite wonderful.
The breaks in the lines create such excellint pacing and rhytm. I escpecially like the backwards chronology, counting down to the end.
thanks! I've never even thought of making a video. I saw the movie 3 times, then I came upon the music and all of a sudden it just clicked.
Qim, thanks for your kind words...I'm new at this, this one is the 4th I've ever made
Stunning work. It's not easy to take something apart and put it together into a cohesive, summative, smaller whole. That takes a great deal of skill. Good job.
Very impressive, Haunted. Your good at this.
Thanks Haunted. I'll check them out.
thanks Qim! Blockbuster have a lot of films that are out of circulation, but I wanted to collect this one so I got it from amazon.com I blogged each video separately, they're all in my blog list on my profile page
That was beautiful, Haunted! Would it be easy to find that movie, say at Blockbuster? Also, I only saw one video, are the other two there? Do I click on them after the first one is over?
thanks, yes I made all three videos